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mixing on this is nice, dubs are done nicely too beat choice is nice too Triple N on the hook is kinda loud but that's niethere here nor there hook is nice though 2nd verse, voice is nice but just a bit monotone but flow's nice N smooth, good ish Trip on the verse, like ya delivery on this the bar clearing your throat was funny lol last verse, don't like his voice much, should make a little change though... turn up his main vocals and dubs down, but overall his verse is kewl overall, Willa's was the verse I enjoyed the most good track all around R.T.F. please |
done thank you very much :)
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willa...flow was on point
Triple comes out of no damn where...sup trip...how u doin baby! hump hump neway...hook was str8 Tony...real solid flow...lackluster delivery Willa came best on this in terms of energy and flow good track OH...here's enygma...flow matched willas on this track...She jus rocked this beat well 1 |
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Beat is hot as fuck...guitar sample be crazy..rlly makes this track even doper.. Willa...you def elevatin shorty...taking rv's no1 femcee spot def..flow is str8 thruout...got a good nice quality..have that floetry type flow...real '99..this dope... Hook: Trip you killed the hook...rlly liked how you did this fam.. Tony Self:...liking the style..another 9o's flow but more 95...flow is hot..delivery is nice..lyrics gd...feelin this old school shit... Triple N:..trip you killed this shit with a new generation style...more energy keeps me entertained..hot delivery..lyrics hot too...you killin this track b..nothin wrong wit this verse atall...hook again hot... Enygma: You got a new generation style too...but the producin aint working fo u...i think ud appeal so much more if a producer got at u cos u got that voice..but its like damn if only it had summin..the producer wud know nah mean..flow is good..not amazain cos it did fall off..but delivery is hot... hot joint yall...1 |
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lmao wow....... but word again, dope track. listened again :cool: |
wow...the strings r killin it already.....fuck this beats mega ill man....
willa, ur a tad loud...like the blood red line....ur flows always sickness...lyrics r nice here too...delevery fits the track feel well...trips delevery is killer...still a tad to loud tho..maybe it's my speakers...idk.... tony come in nice,,,,delevery is a biggi here man...ya'll was in the midset on this one...tony sound real crisp here to....gun shots was a nice touch.... hooks ill man...like it a lot... sound like some cowboy shit lol trip come in mega hype...delevery factor still..multis killin it here....flows nice....lol at the ahhh hemm shit...ya'll gettin me souped to write more lol.... nygma, come in nice...flows nice, libs a tad to loud....emotion nice on this shit...lyrics is on, like the voice a lot bro..always have..grimey as hell... sickness.... |
he has gunshots in hsi vers lol : /
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yo this track is definatly goin on the RV mixtapes i make werd displays lyrical ability very well
first i love what yall did with the chorus...except for the accent on blood iono who did the chorus but it was raw except for that one word for me. Liked Willa's emotion on this and the flo. concepts stayed on point as sometimes emcee's minds have a tendency to wander. Dope iono you guys voices so 2nd verse: pretty good emotion sounded like it coulda been upped but the vocals were ok. flo sounded choppy in a spot or 2 but overall good drop 3rd verse: Came in loud den a mug but it had me crackin up when he said making sounds like.... and the flo was on point overall dope drop 4th verse: I do know this voice, your flo is always dope to me and i loved the get yo ass back here line vocal levels were on point, don't think i have any negativity dope drop all this over a tight chill beat=nice overall dope drop definatly a download and bump in the whip type track Rtf be back with a link l8r days |
thank yo9u sir no doubt drop it ill rtf
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Peepin - Willa - Wow, I seriously have not peeped the songs section for awhile - you improved your stuff alot too. Adlibs are nicely done, and flow is straight. Quality not too bad, like your lyrics. hook - ummm.. Not really feelin it - I woulda done it a lil different. The melody is super nice, but Trip comes in too hard where i woulda done it smoother as its a pretty smooth track. Anyways - Tony - Nice verse bro - ain't heard you in a LONG time either. Ya vocals seem a little low to me, but good verse, nice lyrics. Trip - Vocals seem to match the hook best obviously, but it seems like you tryin to really put alot of different flow changes into a track that doesn't really need it. Good verse again - so far this track is nice. Enygma - Low vocals again, but ya flow hasn't really changed - haha still good - seeing as I liked ya flow even back in the day. Best lyrics in my opinion, jus felt it best I guess.
Overall - nice track ya'll - good 4 person colab. 1 |
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