uppin

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aiight peepin....

like intro you like "dreamin' way my life", beat fits too. dope....

oh snap this like some old school beat. feelin' this man.


like your delivery. nice and laid back... wow and then when you switch it that's tight.. LOL @ found like pennies under a couch. hook is illness. fire

second verse nice too. your emotion is dope for this beat, all fits tight. good shit

hook again. dopee


like the heavenly gates opening up, is this you lord? damn dope outro too man.

def a dope track yo. really feelin' this man. keep it up props.. 9.4/10

EZ

love the intro, beat is hella dope, love how the songs starts, who's beat is this? is it a producer on soundclick, if yes please post the link, like the emotion, man this song is fucking dope, flow is perfect...........* downloaded *

Speats

this your best track def. man wow bravo

word up thanks for all the feed peeps!

uppin yo

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next time you randomly upp a month old thread you can drop two more links

thanks for informing me on this "new rule"

beats cool, real ambient.

qual's on point. the content is on point and you keep it real, i just don't liek the packaging of the message, i like things more lyrical to say the same thing. some minute points you have a jumble of sound where it's impossible to make out anything being said. smetimes you gave up on the rhymeschme like at the end of the first verse where the last line didn't rhyme with anything. def don't wanna end a verse on a bad note liek that when doing the right thing is so easy. just by listening to how it's laid out i can tell what your frame of mind was when you wrote it. i like the concepts and what's being discussed in the song and i think it should be rewritten and layed over this beat again.


payce