lol yea

thanx for all the feed everyone

Definitely feeling you swag on this Tony. Flow was on point. Yvonne's quality was suprisingly nice. Sounds like she's missing something though. I think it's just a little of a confidence issue.....can only be solved with doing this more.


Good shit though :thumbup:

alot better than i thought tonybrown gettin on down i like the vibe sounds good yvvone definately gettin stronger by the song and quality right there with her gettin stronger every siong only thing is ................keep doin em stay up famz and holla at me ................is it your time ? stay up

Listening...

Beat is okay.

First verse comes in nicely...not too bad flow wise, alot better from what I last heard from you. Decent lyrics, decent flow. Nothing to complain about.

Second verse...quality was a little staticky..could be by speakers. Anyway, flow wise this wasnt bad...a little sketchy in spots, but decent. Voice seems to work okay with the beat...nothing too great, but nothing bad either.

Didn't like the beat switch.

Keep it up.

RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236476

thanx everyone. im hittin that link up right now

This beats cool and the hooks on point

1st Sounds good real nice flow and all presence is tight everything else sounds right
2nd You sound alright the lyrics are there and the flow n all on point, you dont sound as good as the 1st person but not bad, still good
3rd Shoulda upped your vocals at first for sure.. But second part sounded better..

Overall.. I liked it.. *listening again* lol

thanx alot!....

lets see wut one more upp will do for this