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^^^^ OK i know you pressed the button forr StackMan but you said therre that you voted forr me....which one did you want? |
This was feedback posted for StackMann
Cool. Dope Verse.
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This was feedback posted for MoneyMaker
checkin pollssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss..........
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This was feedback posted for MoneyMaker
1st bar: the first bar needed to be cut down and worded diffrent so that it could hit harder
2nd bar: i wasn't really feelin the first line in this bar....the second line was a little decent....u should probably used that as a set up for a punch 3rd bar: stretched again....same as the first bar 4th bar: i c what u were trying to do....but hate to say it to my a crew member but that line was a filler |
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1st bar: im not feelin this.... wasn't really standin out to me 2nd bar: uhhh....not feelin this either not really a punch....should have put something else as the second line.... because it was a filler 3rd bar: nope...mediocre ryhme schme was to simple....try chosin diffrent words....use better vocab 4th bar: this i feel was ur best bar....if u could have worded it better this would have been hot.... |
so my vote goes to money maker....by a hair........
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Voted For: MoneyMaker
lol you wildin dog, killed him with the punches, better closer line.... Stackmann fucked his punches up with his wording.... You took this.. |
This was feedback posted for StackMann
im not voting, but if i did Stack would tak e it...
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^^^ Then why didnt you vote forr him...anywayzz...vote upp yall
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^LOL that's what I'm saying....
lol check his sig, he an anime-rapper....! Lmfao Stop dickriding cartoons dog. |
Voted For: MoneyMaker
Wack battle but Money at least attempted some parts of lyricism |
ok thatts 4-0...how much longerr until this battle is a rapp?
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stop texting about guns you fucking jokes................................this shit is getting outta hand strobe needs to get ip banning ma fuckers
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Again....you want to vote on the fuckingg battle or keep beingg a haterr?...talk about you scarred to text us usingg the excuse "You dont text"...da fuck out of herre
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Voted For: StackMann
my vote is for mm because stackmans verse was two simple mm just out did him in every catigory harder punches better sceam and overall injoyment personals were kinda lacking but still money had him there |
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