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MoneyMaker 11-03-06 10:40 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by @WhiTeOuT@
Voted For: StackMann

Pound for Pound I deffinately outweigh the nigga, Keep tryna get ya weight up but you get no bigga,
Yo ass run when you seem me so you aint a Gorilla, so while yatryna back track you will get capped with the pull of my trigga.
^^ a little too long nothin great here

We The Source like Benzino, and ruthless like Al Pacino,
My lyrics are lethal, barely legal so you will have no Sequel.
-nothin special here either


This nigga is stepping up to The King imma say off with his head forr treason,
To get all those stale rhymes from his gums he needed MouthWash so he could spit something halfway decent.
ok punch, could have said better

Yall Starvin niggaz try to eat like ‘Pac-Man’ but im the Ghosts ill lay down the ‘Clapps-Man’,
Seperatingg you like a ‘faction’…so I know you caint fuck with my ‘Stacks…Man’!
best bar of the battle, good wordplay

so you think your lyrically inclined to challenge anyone.
man you have a better chance aiming at your dome wit my mini gun//
not directed at anyone, weak bar

i mean you say that your making money,in different ways. but todays a new day an im comming to take your pay//
^^ a personal average at best

leave yo ass out on a sidewalk, your fuckin wit stackmann and im spitin the facts,
so end your carreer,relax,your wack and u cant rap cat//
^^ weak no punch, nothin

so end your carreer,relax,your wack and u cant rap cat//
ill have your head spining in every direction, like ready set, release stackmaans leathal inject, the infection has you weak to the point you cant spit, so stop trying, cause your verses are shit //
^^ talkin about urself and not ur opponent

V. Moneymaker


^^^^ OK i know you pressed the button forr StackMan but you said therre that you voted forr me....which one did you want?

Symphonic 11-04-06 01:45 AM

This was feedback posted for StackMann
 
Cool. Dope Verse.

Flip 11-04-06 02:15 AM

This was feedback posted for MoneyMaker
 
checkin pollssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss..........

CyKo 11-04-06 11:26 AM

This was feedback posted for MoneyMaker
 
1st bar: the first bar needed to be cut down and worded diffrent so that it could hit harder

2nd bar: i wasn't really feelin the first line in this bar....the second line was a little decent....u should probably used that as a set up for a punch

3rd bar: stretched again....same as the first bar

4th bar: i c what u were trying to do....but hate to say it to my a crew member but that line was a filler

CyKo 11-04-06 11:39 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by StackMann
so you think your lyrically inclined to challenge anyone.
man you have a better chance aiming at your dome wit my mini gun//
i mean you say that your making money,in different ways. but todays a new day an im comming to take your pay//
leave yo ass out on a sidewalk, your fuckin wit stackmann and im spitin the facts,
so end your carreer,relax,your wack and u cant rap cat//
ill have your head spining in every direction, like ready set, release stackmaans leathal inject, the infection has you weak to the point you cant spit, so stop trying, cause your verses are shit //
---no beef


1st bar: im not feelin this.... wasn't really standin out to me
2nd bar: uhhh....not feelin this either not really a punch....should have put something else as the second line.... because it was a filler
3rd bar: nope...mediocre ryhme schme was to simple....try chosin diffrent words....use better vocab
4th bar: this i feel was ur best bar....if u could have worded it better this would have been hot....

CyKo 11-04-06 11:40 AM

so my vote goes to money maker....by a hair........

*Froze* 11-04-06 04:50 PM

Voted For: MoneyMaker

lol you wildin dog, killed him with the punches, better closer line....

Stackmann fucked his punches up with his wording....

You took this..

Valiant 11-06-06 12:17 PM

This was feedback posted for StackMann
 
im not voting, but if i did Stack would tak e it...

MoneyMaker 11-09-06 07:30 PM

^^^ Then why didnt you vote forr him...anywayzz...vote upp yall

*Froze* 11-09-06 08:20 PM

^LOL that's what I'm saying....

lol check his sig, he an anime-rapper....! Lmfao

Stop dickriding cartoons dog.

Sir Smash'Alot 11-09-06 08:39 PM

Voted For: MoneyMaker

Wack battle but Money at least attempted some parts of lyricism

MoneyMaker 11-10-06 05:01 PM

ok thatts 4-0...how much longerr until this battle is a rapp?

TROUBLESOME™ 11-10-06 05:06 PM

stop texting about guns you fucking jokes................................this shit is getting outta hand strobe needs to get ip banning ma fuckers

MoneyMaker 11-12-06 04:29 PM

Again....you want to vote on the fuckingg battle or keep beingg a haterr?...talk about you scarred to text us usingg the excuse "You dont text"...da fuck out of herre

Enlightend 11-12-06 06:14 PM

Voted For: StackMann

my vote is for mm because stackmans verse was two simple mm just out did him in every catigory harder punches better sceam and overall injoyment personals were kinda lacking but still money had him there


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