rofl your soo bitch your boyz......u mean ya net buddies.....rofl.......your so cool..........
i believe u said beef will end aftere this.....now its far from over ahahahahaha contradictin ya self again moron
great job

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Voted For: troublesome06

ok i voted from the heart this time no hate on any of u guys


past tense- the intro for me was a time waster , seemed like u were just trying to pass the time so u could meet the time limit
and that was how it was at the end of it too , no hate
as for the lyrics concern they were good , they flowed good and were punching good man ,ill give u props on that,
as for lenthness it wasnt that long but really its about the time and wat u do with that. good job.beat was aight too.

troublesome- ok lets see here beat was koo, lyrics were funny in some places, lol at deep fried mic. lines were great man i did like them they flowed great and a lot of punches were said.
it was good man props.

ok this was a really good battle i liked it u guys were great . but there can only be one winner so i voted for troublesome based on that he had more punches,lines and flowed better.

vt. troublesome

NO HATE ANYONE GREAT BATTLE!!!!!!!!!

uppin this for votes....................................

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Voted For: Past Tense

Past Tense got this with no problem.

Troublesome's didnt even have a battle type feeling. Alot of lame lines aswell "this man shaped like dude from king of the hill" wtf? and troublesome had alot of lines like that that was very corny and wack. He also lacked delivery which he even said himself. If you dont feel 100% confident in your verse why drop it? How you goin diss someone for changin their style up? thats a GOOD thing! duh. Bad verse from Troublsome, it was long as hell and not impressive at all.

Past Tense, immediately I feel like its a battle. lmao @ the jawlines connected to your chest line. Yeah, the picture clearly shows that. Delivery is decent. Past Tense is wins this on delivery alone
v/Past Tense.

^^^^^^^^stfu homo..................................go have sum tea faget............

aight upppin for some more votes!! LETS GET IT POPPIN!

Voted For: Past Tense

Listenin'....

Troublesome damn mayne ya vocals too high and the qual is hurting my ears dawg errr mayne lyrics are nice but yo fa real this quality rlly fucking wiht my ears..ill try keep listening..fat jokes is nice...some good personals here...cuda been done better...like..

u need to get a grip…an just be yourself man…….
So a fat kid….chewing onna thanksgiving ham……
drop alota punds….seek tha atkins diet……
Or grab sum lypo suction…com. On dude try it…..

nah mean?.....cuda been set up better nah mean....but had the personals..

I dont like the 2nd beat choice ya shit was nice tho...mr gunit fan repping black wall st.....ride ya dick line was hot....had some decent flow on there....however sumtimes packing too much in there..still nice sea sick line was nice..some hot lines personals good...quality made my ears like die lol...delivery good flow was not as good as I hoped..and cuda been delivered better and some lyrics set up better but still went pretty hard..7.3/10

now PT..

lol at ya intro...OH SNAP this beat is one of my favourites..aight nice choice at beat...

quality is nice....nice delivery made it more funny u tried humiliating dude as troublesome came raw underground style u came mixtape himilation type..lol at stocks at wall street mayne haha that was nice..wudnt take 7 days to comprehend that u weak..that's hot...

both came hard..troublesme raw shit..PT some real nice lines there ima hve to be real this one goes to PT in my opinion jus by a lil way I jus prefer the way he delivered..it was a nice battle tho

Voted For: troublesome06

Past Tense
Yo dude first thing I looked at ya lyrics and was like where the fuck are they? you shoulda wrote a bit more. Your intro was way to long as well, you should just went right into the rappin man and at least wrote another 16. Anyway you had some decent lines but you was more self glorified, it was kinda weird cause it seemed like you were feedin off the punchlines he used on you. But anyway decent job.

Troublesome:
You got this one hands down, Past Tense coulda made it more interesting but nah he didn't hardly try. You talk about nuts to much you fuckin squirel:thumbup: anyway your punches were there more and you took the effort to write a little bit more. I realized somin coo for my elevation in rap superstar as I went through ya lyrics but anyway nice job man you got my vote.

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hey paranoid i gotta question

how do you feed off a battle that you drop first in?

please explain to me on this?

and how was mine self glorified? i didn't say IM SO GREAT I GOT RIMES SPINNING..i think you need to learn how to vote

your officially a fucking retard

and forget about me dropping on that sogn

Voted For: Past Tense

checkin polls...too cool with pt to vote but just looking.0


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why are you flippin dude? holy man, I was just being honest. I meant you were being self glorified cuz you'd mention yourself like how eminem did in 8 Mile. how he uses his own personals against him it kinda sound like that. ut I guess this means you really weren't gonna finish that verse for me, your a chump.