this was really close. and tobe honest i wasnt feelin alot from either. both of you guys got some room to elevate, but just keep writing. anyways, i thought stanza was a bit more creative than SSA. I think Smash coulda had it if he'd had more thought into his lines, i like his structure WAY more. But as it is, i think Stanza got this. It's close though.

only line i really liked from SSA was the talent show one, and that didnt have enough totake the battle.

Stanza, please leave links in your battle, but I checked and saw that you voted

Stanza WINS 9-11
Sir Smash'Alot LOSES and BITCHES 2-5