LMAO @ Para-NOID turning into PARA--DICE

HAHA...and, if that's "real" name, someone named you after a gay stripper.


lol...Para-NERD.






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rofl at stripper..duke's name is Paradis...

I guess i can admit to changing th spelling with the y and the c....but my name is Paradis...without the e cuz it's french. if you want I can have a different net identity but i aint changin my real name man. to many people in my city tellin me i bit paranoid and shit so i had to do somin.

The beat:I like the beat..th epianos an strings..sorta of reminds me of D-block-ish

Flow:It seems like u have to adjust ur tempo a bit...take sum of the words out to fit.but overall..u have energy an sound aggressive.

Lyrics:sum parts are decent..the rest seems to stray off subject at times..but still the hook is pretty cool..."I never walked alone in my own hood"<--lmao.pretty slick.practice on ur vocals..pronounce the words a bit better..

overall/-the quality was pretty good..did u use a compressor or not..it sounded like there was sum air in the vocal part..but still I like the hook an sum of the verse..just needs to be livin'd up..a bit.IMO.

keep it movin,props.