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-   -   17. Comedian (10-3) vs. 18. Cocaine (3-1) (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239104)

N.Tavarez 01-13-07 05:50 PM

i'll pound your abdominals, work punches to the mid-section..
and smash inner-com
.... so much principals can no longer announce detentions..
ur a different type of comedian, && i dont see this as real fair..
cuz when im done, you'll be the only one doing standup from a wheel chair
even if shady signed u, your rhymes would never get off the shelf..
cuz i'll make ur blood flow thru more creekwater then bobby himself

vs



i'll serve you with tactics that'll have you murdered in caskets
yeah, you will leave me in the dust... right after i burn you to ashes
i'm carrying heat but use knives on you because it's shorter
Cocaine lives life on the edge... and I'm known for cutting corners

this was a decent battle here, both came good
cocaine had a better delivery and more hits
com wouldve took it with two more good bars
v/ cocaine

Final. 01-13-07 11:58 PM

i'm carrying heat but use knives on you because it's shorter
Cocaine lives life on the edge... and I'm known for cutting corners
This Is Either Very Played Or Bitten,
I`ve Seen This Before,
Sorry If I`m Wrong Tho Man.


we're both ranked in the middle but unlike you i dont give a fuck..
cause while your the 'median, cocaine will just continue to move up..
i mean really, half your wins are from the cypher and i wonder why??
how do you keep winning that shit?? thats right.. we all have lives..

vs

you saw Brokeback & want to spend life in bed with some queers
and you're coming in las'so just grab the fucking rest of your gear

V//Coke.

Final. 01-14-07 12:14 AM

Hmmm, I Knew I Saw It.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Comedian
i'm carrying heat but use knives on you because it's shorter
Cocaine lives life on the edge... and I'm known for cutting corners


Quote:
Originally Posted by Feeble Minded
L or W? with no effort i'll give this slut the former
they say he's got the edge.. this week im cutting corners


http://rapbattles.com/forum/showpos...435&postcount=5

Might Not Be Considered Biting,
I Just Didn`t Wanna Feel Like An Idiot Thinking I Saw It.

Comedian 01-14-07 01:03 AM

That is pretty similar. I'm not going to deny it. My only defense is that I've never even read an RB battle.

okay 01-14-07 01:12 AM

its similar but not a bite at all

Final. 01-14-07 01:20 AM

Aight, I Just Had To Pleed My Case.

DaTrusHurtz 01-14-07 11:03 AM

Okay, I'm gonna reverse Tony's vote. He quoted more lines from Comedian and his explanation indicated that he liked Comedian's verse better. It seems he just made a mistake and put the wrong name.

About the biting accusation, its very close, no doubt about that, but Comedian has never been accused of biting, and also that concept isn't really a very hard one to think of. Its pretty conceivable that someone could have thought of the same concept that way so I'm gonna let it slide.

Given all this, this battle is 5-5 and I'm going to cast the tie-breaker vote.

even if shady signed u, your rhymes would never get off the shelf..
cuz i'll make ur blood flow thru more creekwater then bobby himself
i'll pound your abdominals, work punches to the mid-section..
and smash inner-com
.... so much principals can no longer announce detentions

vs.

i'm carrying heat but use knives on you because it's shorter
Cocaine lives life on the edge... and I'm known for cutting corners
you saw Brokeback & want to spend life in bed with some queers
and you're coming in las'so just grab the fucking rest of your gear

This battle was real close and I can see why the voting is tied, I got quotables tied myself. Really just comes down to style here. Cocaine, I feel like you have too many statementish lines. Your verses are very indirect at getting to the opponent. Comedian, you gotta work on your creativity n' coming more fresh. You never have lines which are that bad, but little stands out so work on making them stand out more with some creativity. Cuz of the consistency, I gotta go with Comedian here.

Vote - Comedian

DaTrusHurtz 01-14-07 11:03 AM

Comedian also wanted a loss removed from last weeks cypher

Comedian WINS 11-2
Cocaine LOSES 3-2


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