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Alright so I listened to everything, gave you my opinions and such.. good cd though, I just used a quick pointform of what I heard, let me know if you waqnt me to clarify anything i'd be happy to do it...

Good work though, keep making more music..

Together

- Liked the beat, nice and mellow and it suits the song theme properly
- I don’t know the story with Oliver Giles, but its pretty good.
- The hook seems like one of those old-school hooks. It suited the song and I liked it.
- The piano dropped out on the 3rd verse… kind of odd to the beat, but it comes back in which seems kind of weird to me
- Good sort of emotional track, I liked it. Enunciation is key though, work on that a little bit, because I missed a few lines because I couldn’t understand what you said

Like That

- Beat is decent seems like a clubish song, it goes well and the flow suits the beat
- Feels like one of those mainstream type songs
- Chorus is decent, goes well with the song
- Apexx comes in, flow is good with the beat in my opinion
- That chorus with the maybe my style, maybe cause im fly… I feel the whole ending part with the maybe cuz im fly doesn’t work… it just doesn’t seem right to me.

Leave A Message
- Nice beat, slow and mellow, I like the guitars.. this is something I’d want to drop on.
- Chorus is pretty good and catchy.. I didn’t realize it was the chorus but after the repetitions I noticed it. No real distinction from verse to chorus in the first verse / first chorus, 2nd verse / chorus transition is better...
- Adlibs are pretty good, they add to the presence of the song… the whole lower whispering is good…
- That phone message thing was pretty good, but I think it’d be better either at the beginning.. to start the track off or at the end.. with the beep of the message going off… just my opinion, it seems out of place right before the last chorus…
- My idea would be to put that right near the end instead of fading it out let it end with the Beep of an answering machine…

Knockout

- I like these beats.. I’d listen to this in my warmup most likely.. its pretty hype
- Nice Muhammad ali line…
- Good name dropping etc… worked well
- Not a huge fan of the counting in the chorus, but its kinda a good catchy chorus though
- Only the lord is above me line was good
- I kind of like the chorus now that I hear it more…
- 3rd verse seems like one of those “check out my ice.. im so hot” type verses in the beginning.. with the whole industry scarred and stuff… just my opinion, the rest of the verse was good..
- Overall it’s a good track, catchy chorus and everything

It’s Prah

- Dark beat.. nice piano, a little too slow but id have to hear the verses
- Nice verse it works perfect, slowish beat, faster verse… I like it.
- I think the chorus would be better if you used that whispery voice for the whole ITS PRAH part, because you went whispery for the first part..then normal voice for the rest of the chorus.. Maybe use the its prah in the low whisper voice, but use your regular voice for the other lyrics..
- Good track.. liked the verses and the chorus.. just check my opinion on the chorus..

Heaven
- Beat reminds me of some diplomat beat I heard before… its nice
- Like the confidence on the verse
- That voice in the background sounds pretty sweet.. I don’t know exactly what to call it…
- Chorus is pretty good. I like this one best out of the tracks ive heard already…
- Flow is nice, slow, and enunciated.

Always

- Nice guitar beat, with the drums, I like it
- Good cover of that song, I forget the name though (The beat)
- Jack Sparrow line was decent
- Chorus is good, sounds a little chipmonkey…know what I mean
- I like the tempo of this song..
- That girls wanna fuck me, cops still wanna arrest me line doesn’t work to me.. it just effects the flow oddly
- Pen and my pad should be plat… good line..
- The tempo of the voice fits, but it sounds so chipmunk like.. I wouldn’t want to listen to that a lot… its good for the chorus though, its just a bitch on the ears
- Good track though, I liked the flow and the tempo of it..

Harlem

- Beat is good, sounds kinda dark.. like the strings
- This is harlem you either make it or you die.. doesn’t work to me.. sounds odd
- Im not a huge fan of the chorus.. I understand it, the singing part im just not feeling, I know what ur trying to do though and it’s a good idea
- Want my pockets to be fat till their stocky and fat… line is just odd to me man
- The singing isn’t as high pitched as it should be, it doesn’t really go with the beat…. Its good, I just think a higher range would be beneficial to the track, kinda like a beyonce type voice.. you know what I mean.. that kinda pitch and stuff

Take it to the top

- Beat is good, sounds like one of those spy / mission impossible type beats you’d hear in the movies.. I dunno I just got that feel
- Chorus is good… nice and catchy
- That whole I part was pretty good, needs a little bit more work to perfect it, it seems the adlibs or something is off a lil bit..
- That ye yo yo yo yo part I wasn’t feeling it just seemed like you didn’t have a verse to fill that spot.. throw some lyrics down man

P From the Block

- I like the beat.. always liked it, just didn’t like it when jlo did it…
- Chorus was good.. tempo was good, taking the whole chorus style from jlo, you can kinda feel that style in there.. but it fits well
- I like the mention of the sample and stuff.. good work it was a good lil verse

I don’t know

- Beat is nice, its got that typical girl track feel to it
- Singing is good it fits the song well etc.
- Verses are good, I like the flow and the tempo to them..
- I like the whole singing stuff in the background.. it adds a nice effect to the track
- Good track overall…

Blaow

- Got that Jamaican type feel to it..
- Like the beat
- Chorus is good..
- Verses are good aswell,
- Its not my type of track, but it’s a good track in general, verses and chorus are good

Put you on the PrahJect

- Wonder where you got this beat from… ive always liked it
- That Montana in scarface doesn’t work with me, the flow is just weird in the beginning…
- The flow is kinda weird, naming the continents / countries just sounds off to me
- Good chorus though… I liked it and it goes well
- 2nd verse is better flowwise… its not choppy like I felt the first one was..
- 3rd verse is good as well…
- Couple of grand, do anything to get a couple of grand.. not a fan of this line.. seems odd..

Aint the man I am

- Beat is good.. like the piano in the beginning
- More respect in they hood line was good
- That chorus sounds weird.. its good but some parts sound odd to me
- The chorus you say is good, I just thing the singing part has some weird sounds too it…
- 3rd verse sounded weird, not lyrically.. just the actual sound.. sounds lower a bit
- Its got that commercial feel to it.. the whole superstar deal and stuff…
- Good track, just a few points I didn’t really like

Whats it gonna be

- you do these tracks good man…. I like the beat and everything
- Verse is good
- HIV line kinda played but its good
- I like how you did this with the other track with the chorus coming from the actual song, its just the chorus is singing is really.. really low aside from the obvious loud part
- I don’t know what it is, I liked how you took this song and worked with it.. good track good tempo to it

Lonely

- Beat is alright its got that basic mellow feel to it…
- All muslims want to blow themselves up.. good line but the flow is effected by it a lil bit.. not much though
- Hah water purity.. and you know it isn’t even pure..
- So.. you did one verse.. and talked for a while
- I thought you were going to drop again..
- Put a verse in there man…
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Hustla

- Akon obviously is good.. his voice is sweet on this beat.. but why bother criticizing him
- Good verses
- All the drug talk and stuff.. not my style.. but its pretty good
- Vegas man was a good line
- Sell a rock to a mountain line was decent
- Good track in general

Black Republicans

- Not even mentioning the beat..
- Too much talk in the beginning.. I hate all that stuff but they did it in the original w/e’s
- That flow is kinda weird from Ojay.. I don’t know what it is in the beginning.. it doesn’t really work with the track…
- Yeah okay you flow better.. and it goes with the beat better for sure..
- You should go back and see if you can fix that up a little bit, the whole first verse, because it doesn’t go with the beat much and it seems to bring down the track..

Get That

- Beat is decent.. sounds like that tainted love track a bit… just go that feeling from it
- I liked your verse
- The chorus is pretty good its slow though but it works
- Spuls verse was pretty good as well
- Decent track, not the best of the bunch, but not the worst

Don’t Push Me

- Beat is alright, sounds like you used it already on the cd though.. sounds similar to another one…
- 2 face line was alright
- Flow was good, decent lines
- Chorus was decent slow
- That friendly line by zone doesn’t work to me..
- Zones presence is a lot more on the mic that the chorus, it’s a lot louder too
- Pair-A-Dyce, decent verse.. goes well with the beat… flow was good

Up in the Hood

- Singing goes with the beat..
- Got that island feel to the beat
- Verses were pretty good..
- Is it my flow or is it delivery.. not feelin that line too much, it just doesn’t sound right
- Nice uptempo track though

Overall the cd was a good one, you had a few flow issues in some tracks, just with the wording of your verses… not a big deal… I liked most of the beats, I liked what you did with the Whats It gonna be and Always.. Not a huge fan of some of the chorus work done by other people, the lyrics are there, just the sound doesn’t seem right. Keep working on your stuff though.. and remember to enunciate a lot , some of the time I couldn’t understand what you were saying it was hard to hear the vocal portion. I know the shit is outta order, but that’s the way it came up in itunes and that’s the way I listened to it…