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xCadaverx 07-30-07 08:38 PM

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sin-scere 07-31-07 10:01 AM

This was feedback posted for xCadaverx
 
if could vote i would vote 4 u. u came harder on him. kinda close still Big daddy did his research. But i would vote 4 u.

yah yo do mi a favour n check out my battle n vote 4 who u think wins ight yo tanx it's Sin-Scere vs JWild

In-Vision 08-01-07 12:10 AM

Voted For: xCadaverx

Okay, my vote goes to cadaver...easily


not even give him a chance like crust on some bread?

come on now, thats weak as all hell

And not every first words of a kid, have anything to do with their parents. Actually, it's more often than not..That a childs first words are the words he/she hears most

Like the...or and...

your sick, he's the weaker opposition..so he's healthy?

or was sick used as a metaphor, when metaphors don't have opposites?

if he was scared, why would he PM you? He obviously just wanted to get your whack ass verse out of the way so people could vote.

and maybe i'm wrong, but he didn't rebuddle..there is no rebuddle in this sort of battle, because you can't read eachothers verse. A rebuttle is a response to something. He didn't respond to your verse. You can't respond to what you don't see or hear.

the edwin hubble part wasn't bad....but you could have made it 10 times better
by having a more relevant set up to the punch, that actually made sense.


cadaver, you had nothing special. But it was consistently better than cadavers verse.

You def fell off the 2nd half, you went from mediocre, to not very good. Either way, it was all better than big daddy....decent job though i guess, keep practicing.

O//^\\EGA 08-01-07 11:05 AM

Voted For: xCadaverx

easily.....Cadaver got this battle.....a lil bit harder hittin than daddy.....

personals went to cadaver.....wordplay and punches went to cadaver

now daddy seems to get a lil bit better.....but from the looks of it, he hjas the concepts, some played but his delivery is what fucks him most of the time......hes tryin tho, ur gettin the concept, id say mix a lil bit of ur style into somethin papoose would do and u should be a lil more polished

xCadaverx 08-01-07 07:20 PM

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Terumoto 08-02-07 07:47 AM

Voted For: xCadaverx

Not a great battle... Flow and all that is alright with both of you, so it came down to quality of punches. Not many great ones. Big daddy, your only decent punch was your closer, that was pretty good. Cadaver didn't have a single punch as good as it, but came better in general instead of just having one punch acting as a crutch for the entire verse.

I'm voting cadaver because consistency is important, and while the consistency wasn't of the best standard, it's better to have a number of OK punches than to have all crappy punches except for one.

medicine 08-02-07 09:18 PM

Voted For: big daddy

i like daddy s verse more thought involved
some original lines
explanations gotta go though like we dont understand what s being said
daddy gets the vote
cadaver was a little corny

xCadaverx 08-02-07 10:23 PM

How many computers can you find, big daddy? >_>
Terrible feedback.

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xCadaverx 08-03-07 02:47 PM

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Ransum 08-03-07 02:55 PM

Voted For: xCadaverx

yo Id like to tell you that im gonna kill this dude but he already dead.
im not even gonna give him a chance like the crust on some bread.
aight..

this cat loves me check every post that hes did.
every word that he said was abought me like the first words of a kid.
aight..

this dude just wants to make up shit like a dirty politician.
I know im sick hes obviously the weaker oposician.
aight...

hes scared he just pm'd me to drop my verse first.
cause his words are dead like his name they both need to be in a herse.
eeeh...

so go head ill stop now do your sorry ass rebuddle
cause you lookin at a star like your name was edwin hubble
eeh ending...

not a bad verse probley the best i've seen from u..
but u elevating so keep practising...
5.5 outta 10


next...


Every time I eat you, its fuckin funny, I laugh
Cuz You thought breakin bread was rippin money in half
good..
Guillotine and castrate till blood spills, youre leight-weight
Adam Sandler lookin motherfucker got me in a mind state
lol good..

Even Joe Rogan can tell spittin is your fear factor
Of course you're names Big Daddy, you're an actor!
eeh.. aight..

I'll fuckin destroy you, get you down and fuckin defecate
You're fuckin underage, other weight, and about to get mic raped
ook..

All homo. haha. You'll never be dope
Even if you were under an LCD light and you're name was hemp-made bar soap.
eeh this trou me off...

not a bad verse u started good then fell off....


7 outta 10

u just had enough to win...


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