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Ransum 08-02-07 04:14 PM

Voted For: JWILD

man anotha eminem wanna b, damn white child
let mi rap diss up early so he git bac on dah road 2 8mile
NAH.. 8 MAIL DISS OR PUNCH ARE PLAYED NOW...

fukin snake, always learkin n peepin
wen i caught him lerkin mutha fuka was in his nigs bed covered in semen
not feeling this....

u aint even Dark, so y u claimin u a Demon
If he's DEMON im SIN his father lil nig goin git a beatin
nah...

Im not dah type talk all shyt,he dah fukin type 2 suk all diks
so wen he say he spit he just talkin bout sukin on diks
why so many gay disses?? weak...

luv his fukin chik,like he married 2 dah game it got him whipped
he'll always b at his computer just waitin 4 summ1 to post a verse
nah...

he just revise it n evaluate 2 si if either him or dah person above him is worst
if dis was 4 cash,im like a thief so i'lll rob his purse his shyt aint a treasure but i aint a pirate but i'll leave him cursed
...... no comment...

JWild who, Nobody kno's u like a bad product promotion
U kno dat kid dat clova killed oh u mean jon
yep dey like did i metion,he as being practisin 2 rap from how long
it neva gets old,im just tellin ya'll da story dat needs 2 b told
his rhymes r like broke niggaz he aint got no Flow
dont let him fool u, he just studied n rehearsed
he at dah mirror pratisin each n every verse
^^^ all that i wasnt feeling at all....

contomplating wat he gone say
but as usuall it sounds good 2 him but 2 otha's his shyt sounds gay
^^ that was the first thing that actully sound decent.. had potential even thou its still another gay diss...

nigga i move more Wigs than a hair dresser, I aint talkin ur blood pressure
Wen i say im applyin pressure 2 Arms
Im talkin bout cockin aim n squeeze wen im blowin off Crawnz
Im a dun right here,Dont want 2 kill him off it's not fair
JWild in mah fukin crew so i had 2 b Sin-Scere

^^ the ending was aight... also had potential.... get more ruthless... talk about what u gonna do... use proper punches...
dont ramble like u just talking make ya verse sound like a verse... its more like a writting paper to me.... keep elevating man... u'll get it soon....

3 outta 10....

next

Sin-scere, Its time for you come to the surface for air,
cause the O2’s running out in your underground lair,
eeeh but aight.. if he was still 0-1 it would of hit harder....

you’ve been lamming it out, now your exposed as a bitch,
While you’re living dual lives as both a mole and a snitch,
eeh...
I’m choosing sides and I’ll never smoke pole to get rich.
How many bitches did you fuck during you’re DAY at the top?
Oh wait I just noticed you’ll never have a day at the top
cause you suck, you’re a gay and a flop.
actully mad me chuckle a bit.... aight

You’ll never get rich off of rap track success,
fakers like you get eaten ALIVE in this bizness.
So tell me bitch Where’d you learn all your whack flows?
Probably from the same grandma who taught you to blow.
nah...

Or was it from your X girl who used to position you backwards,
Throw on a strap-on, and use you for practice?
LOL...

You claim to be a great wordsmith or artist.
You’re about to be a late wordsmith; J-Wild’s the smartest.
eeh...

So in a minute I’m gonna celebrate by smoking a Winston,
You know J runs WILD not this Jamaican from Kingston,
lol... decent...
So ima give credit for the structure to the man Loyd Banks,
And you know the song too cause I’m “poppin them thangs.”
again ending...

you def have potential some of your bars you would of worded a bit better to hit alot harder....
you did have a few that made me chuckle and laugh creativeness is almost there just need better wording...
punches you could work...
u had somewhat of a personal which was aight...

def have potential keep elevating fam....

6 outta 10

medicine 08-02-07 09:12 PM

Voted For: JWILD

j-wild gets my vote
lyrics where more thought out
smoother flow and written in a way most could understand.
sinscere seemed to be angry rather than bring somthing original

KM 08-08-07 11:34 AM

Voted For: JWILD

giving this to J wild....he remained consistent with his diss....

sin sere u were off and on...on some parts u had a diss other parts seemed u were just freestyling....had some good punches though.....

~1~ 300........

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sin-scere 08-08-07 02:00 PM

it was al freestyle lol hahahahaa. i was fucked on diss 1 yo lol . he in mah crew i didnt want 2 go 2 hard lol. Dats my bad

JWILD 08-17-07 10:53 AM

It's been a while, but I'm back and bumpin for votes...

sin-scere 08-17-07 07:07 PM

werd mah nigga damn yo, ppl dont like votin in here shyt lol. bumpin 4 votes

sin-scere 08-27-07 09:51 PM

CAN SUMMMONE VOTE PLEZZZZZ JEZZZZZ. DISS BATTLE HAS BEEN UP 4 A REALLI LONG WHILE YO SHYT. i hav voted on soo much battles yo damn


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