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Red Bull 10-11-07 12:35 AM

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Red Bull 10-11-07 03:52 AM

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Red Bull 10-12-07 05:13 AM

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Red Bull 10-12-07 01:56 PM

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Fly-E 10-12-07 06:04 PM

This was feedback posted for DJ-Sydm
 
Ummm i think ur verse is better which is why imm givin u the vote cus ur punches hit hard and u used his name as if he were right infront of u wich is tight! But i didnt like this battle so imma put it as a tie well thats my feed back!

Red Bull 10-13-07 01:15 PM

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Red Bull 10-15-07 01:02 AM

Close this mother fucking battle like now with votes and shit.

Red Bull 10-16-07 02:21 AM

Close this mother fucking battle like now with votes and shit.

Red Bull 10-17-07 04:57 AM

Vote.Vote.Vote.Vote.Vote.Vote.Vote.Vote.Vote.Vote.

white rebel 10-18-07 03:23 AM

This was feedback posted for DJ-Sydm
 
f.oo
i thought you had better punches, better flow you came harder, easy to read all in all a good peice

vs

dj-sydm
i found your harder to read and the flo wasnt quite there still a alright peice

v/f.oo

Red Bull 10-18-07 05:38 AM

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Red Bull 10-19-07 08:46 PM

Vote.Vote.Vote.Vote.Vote.Vote.Vote.Vote.Vote.Vote.

Adam 10-20-07 04:51 PM

This was feedback posted for F.oo
 
I have F.oo taking this one.. well because I am F.oo..

just an up.

J. Luth 10-20-07 08:13 PM

Voted For: F.oo

NIGGERSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS SSSSSSSS

DaTrusHurtz 10-21-07 09:26 PM

Voted For: F.oo

Foo - Ur verse was alright I guess, but wording is killing your punches from landing. The first bar woulda been better with the 3 line style and the rest. The closer u coulda done much more with than the "even ur old name is confused thing" Alright verse tho.

DJ - First off, u need to develop a consistent rhyme scheme for ur shit to be effective in text. Anyway, u didn't really have much in terms of punches.. i mean the dog has his day thing with vick is played, the redbull thing is played, just wasn't anything harsh in here.

Vote - F.oo


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