i was kidding about the whole suicidal thing of course...but seriously idc about wining and loosing.

i just care about sweaty pits.

Mystic, you had a personal punch but I felt that the world choice that you picked wasn't very creative. However, the 1st line connected to the 2nd line very well...


DJ-SYDM, the wordplay & creativity was done a little better. Even though the concept has been used before, you executed the punch better..


Vote - DJ-Sydm

thanks for the feed and vote.

nice punch dj that was one of the best so far

mystic yours was forced like you rushed it and aint read it back to yourself

vote- DJ

I wont even ASK.Y you rap, cuz ya shits extinct like a MAMOUTH
Matta fact,DJ how bout you listen ta ya own name
.................................................. .............and SHUT YO' DAMN MOUTH!

1st line: flow aight and decent set up.. sorda a punch to as-well...
2ed line: aight flow.. a bit personal but lacking impack on the punch and sorda force as-well mamouth and danm mouth dont really flow good but then again every punch dont have to rhyme as-long as it connects good which this one didnt really connect that good...


Mys' can't stic a punch, Nobody wants to see me in a 'bout with him'
cause if he lasts more than a second its cause the ref had to count to 10!

1st line: a bit of word-play and a aight flow decent set up...
2ed line: flow aight a bit more creative and decent punch not the hardest punch but a decent one that hit harder...


winner: dj

thnx...........................

Vote: DJ

/Mystic biting my Ask Y idea = gay.



Word.

Meh, who cares, shit was filler

lol

it was sorda the same concept but it wasnt the whole bar itself so its not concider biting but a lack of creativeness...

either way he still lost thou....

Word, mine was better. :coo:

^^ word...... way better.....

Mystic, just wasn't feelin' urs, felt like the wit wasn't there. DJ's was nice, he got this one.

Vote - DJ

v/ DJ... mystics punch was too simple, dj's was decent, not really hard hitting, but mys had nothing, so

i did use the same concept, but it wasn't the focus of my punch. it was used in diff. terms. and f.oo we were supposed to be lovers.

I felt that mystics was forced and not really hittin that hard, but good attempt. You prolly coulda done things a bit differently to make it more effective. eg. not rhyming with MAMOUTH. ...iunno, thats just my 2 cents anyways.

DJ, yours was straight up witty as fuck and made me laugh. Nice flow.

v/DJ......