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Cola 11-06-07 01:45 PM

Voted For: Ransum

umm...ransum won this battle for coming with less played punches

that Kat-apart thing was pretty ill.....

overall tho Ransum came much much sicker

Mystic City 11-06-07 05:24 PM

yup thanx fo votin.....lets get dis battle ova wit....

sin-scere 11-08-07 09:08 PM

This was feedback posted for Ransum
 
yo you did wat u normally do and ripped him apart 1 bar by the other naw mean keep doin your thing yo... you blowed this battle wit just a lil bit of lyricism

HELLonEARTH 11-08-07 10:30 PM

Voted For: Ransum

Not impressed. Rookie at best.

Ransum: You attempt to use big ideas for nice setups, but it comes off weak. Archaeologist line was easily the most solid line in the whole verse. Not a strong drop at all, typical standard issue rhymes.
Score: 5

Mystic City: Please stop explaining your punches. Not that strong, and none of them really needed explaining. Keyboard on fire? Ancient. Try to keep your syllable count per line similar.
Score: 2.5

Much love, try again folks.

DaTrusHurtz 11-15-07 08:19 PM

Voted For: Ransum

Not a great battle here really, but Ransum at least had some punchlines in here. They weren't dope, but punchlines never the less. Mystic came played and weak and was more interested in flow than punches.

Vote - Ransum.


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