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Young Sin

12-19-07 09:13 AM

nice emotions homie...... nice concept..... it was nice

stay up

Sin

Phorge

12-24-07 06:37 PM

Plain piece, not much emotion, lacked creativity
among other things. Keep writing and you'll be decent.

42-Keyz

12-26-07 07:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dickard.

lol@ this being bitten.....if it is...wise choice lmao

:laugh2: :stupid:

this verse was ok.. only thing is.. i wouldnt definitely listen to the whole song.. fasho

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