This was feedback posted for SUPERVILLAIN
 

this haters disses 'mimic sheets of paper'...because they 'all fall flat', its known...
he couldnt get 'a-head' if he were a 'ballcap', or served a tall 'draft with foam'
dope bar, i think you got this one,punches hit alot harder.

I don't think you had enough wp in your verse sv, haha.

i just re anylized the battle,sv's does have this one for sure in my opinion,
his verse was better than lay fears, better structure, more creative,harder punches, better multies,and on top of everything lay fear had a crew vote so did sv but that was an accident.
lay fear you said house rules that means no recycled lines no no crew votes..and honestly your verse wasnt very good..your structure was off and o wasnt really feeling the punches.plus you recycled lines..
sv's got this

Well than you should have voted talk

This was feedback posted for SUPERVILLAIN
 

checkin pollz fam..you should take this easily....

We're not crew. Lol. If I had known that we were considered crew then I wouldn't have voted, man. Don't try to sway shit. Check my posts. Never have I even acknowledged the exsistence of BTY. I understand SV dq'in it because he thought we were crew and I don't care one way or another. But don't try to sway votes by saying "there was an intentional crew vote."

^^^lol. you cant be serious doggy.

im far from being a hater, so let me break this down for you...

1) lack of wordplay would be me recycling old lines that i used in battles with other people. rofl. i personally think that that is wack as fuck and if i were a mod, i would've dq'ed you off of that alone since it is against the standard "house rules"...yet flash didnt, so he must feel differently about this issue than i do. i think that it sets a bad precident for others to follow, not to mention, it shows a lack of creativity and overall laziness on your part.

2) peep my verse again. you and kirk might not of liked it (ha!...so i did my job), but i had consistent material that actually incorporated you throughout my piece. your verse on the other hand only mentioned me like twice, plus, out of the 2 mentions that you did drop, you blatantly typed up a fake personal (like the "me currently losing in multiple leagues" line) that sounded like a pre-written line for someone else that you were going to battle who is actually in a tourney. lol.

3) you didn't even really acknowledge the requests that i made to initiate this battle in the first place, but i still made do with your rules. i just feel that in the wide scope of things that you severely underestimated me and you're regretting it now. fuck a text record homie...losses happen to the best of us (well, except nos of course...lol, jk). I AM WITHOUT A DOUBT, TOTALLY CONFIDENT THAT I WON THIS BATTLE...HANDS DOWN. regardless of the voter turnout, you couldn't tell me otherwise, word. that previous comment is not intended to knock your work, im just telling it like it is. im honest with myself. i (of anyone) would know if i deserved to catch n ''L''. dont get me wrong, i think that you're a talented cat and as far as "the active battlers in the front lines at this current point in time", you're definately one of the best, that's why i chose a match with you...to test myself and todust off some of the old cobwebs.

im content with my piece. it hit its mark, wordplay and all. good luck, i wish you nothing but the best.

oner...



...s.v. dangerous, big bad crhyme sindicate

This was feedback posted for Lay Fear
 

polls cool battle both of you

Haha. SV. What Lay said was definetly sarcasm, dude. Him and I spoke about this battle and I said to him "SV was tossin' wordplay almost every fuckin' line, man." So, I can pretty much say that I'm 99% sure that was sarcasm. Joke, bro. Don't take it to the heart.

And as for me "not liking your verse." I thought it was a good verse, man. You both came with punches. I gave my vote to Lay cause his punches made me laugh. Don't act like I came in this battle to dickride cause "I'm in his crew." I came in here to vote on a battle, man. An opinion is an opinion.

^^^word. i can respect that.

its kind of hard to hear a sarcastic tone when reading text...lol.

oner...


...the supe

Lmao. dont' catch feelings. Idc about some FL battles on rv when I got playoffs goin on RB, I'm sorry I didn't put my 100 percent ALL into this like you did but its not that big of a deal. I had a punch or two I thought up..an when I looked it said 4 minutes left to post. So I recycled. If you care so strongly about winning and the horrible recycling than you can have the win, just say the word an I give flash permission to close this. Hahaha


props on ya sick verse.

lay, kirk:

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...337#post3215337
^^^...if y'all are interested in the life of crhyme, feel free to try-out gents. you both have my vote.

hollar.


esvee, big bad crhyme sindo '08

Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

super:
i'll get 'ballsy', he wont do shit, he only 'gets nuts' when facin' his buddy's pair
he's afraid of any real competition...watch me have this ''lay fear'' running scared
2/5 - meh opener.

''iron man?'' please!!! watch me 'rock' this topic: im 'death metal' and you're emo
lay fear is a 'front lines coward'.....he makes ''soulja boy'' look like a 'war hero'
3.5/5 - decent.
this haters disses 'mimic sheets of paper'...because they 'all fall flat', its known...
he couldnt get 'a-head' if he were a 'ballcap', or served a tall 'draft with foam'
2/5 - meh.
dudes writin' is trash, he sucks more than the tube used when ones syphonin' gas
his rhymes gettin' cash??? the only time he'll get papers when he's wipin' his ass
3/5 - iight multi's.
frighten this cat??? when it comes to 'typin'' if i show him a 'hyphen' he'll 'dash'
so who's 'violent' with rap? this guy 'nose' a beating, just minus the 'sinus attack'
4/5 - niice wordplay.
well, since im your 'pen pal', im clickin' 'send now'...so heres a 'letter' for you...
...im not 'aphilly-ated' with your crew, but yet i've proven that im ''b.etter t.han y.ou''
2/5 - meh closer.
=16.5



lf:
You got no reason to be waiting cuz you'll easily be cooked with the ratings.
Punches givin u n' adrenaline rush..that will even make the Bears defense look degrading.
3.5/5 - pretty good opener.
bitch's ain't about the old type..must be jokin if u think u'll hold hype
now if love is blind...it explains why B's had perfect vision his whole life
1/5 - line sounds like it was biten.
This homo's contestin for the top spot..So in this bout he'll be noticed.
The skeletons in his closest..died before they even came out an exposed him.
3/5 - iight.
Nooone even acknowledges you, but its fact that he'll try an offend me.
Although SV is signed up for alot of leagues,..but jus' doesn't seem to excel in ANY.
2/5 - meh.
This jerk won't be able to find a doctor to mend him, it'll be the ending see.
Cuz this dick will be ripped hard enough to not even be rivaled by a vasectomy.
1/5 - forced.
Make you my bitch..I'll break you n switch as this abusing will help.
If axe EVER wraps the belt around the waist..its cuz I'd be to tired to do it myself.
1/5 - weak.
Dam, tune your girlish ego down. It reminds me that your dumb.
But everyone says lifes a bitch..... Guess thats why Super's as lively as they come.
2/5 - meh closer.
=13.5

..........
cant, were in the same crew and know each other in real life..it would be unfair.

^^^bumpage for more votes. uppin' this battle.


the supe