Voted For: King Mathers

Neither one of you did extremely good.

But I'll give it Matters for the Harry Houdini/Appendix line. I actually looked it up to see if you were making a false personal, but it wasn't. Houdini did die from getting punched in the stomach. Nice.

Houdini, I liked the Willis/Armageddon line and the illest-kid/willis-did multi was nice. But next time try to get some personals in you verse.

Vote=Houdini

Correction... Vote=Mathers

Voted For: King Mathers

in my battle i misspelt a word, you knew what i meant but you took a shot that wasn't fair
nigga you far from perfect, broke ass faggot i bet your momma still cuts your hair
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this wasn't a good line at all because it had no wordplay and probably isn't true, but it made me laugh a little. oh and dont put spaces between your bars kid, it looks real newbish
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battleing has nothing to do with ILLEST-KID WILLIS- DID, type shit, showing that u are rhyming words is retarded. its about creativity and punchlines with wordplay that make fun of your opponet. u have to find out something true about his name and then find a way to flip it using wordplay so it hits.
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like wit that houdini line wit the appendix bursting. u got that to work with now thing of a way to use a metaphor with the punch like.
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i'll kill u like the real houdini wit a punch to the back.. u cant defend it
i aint talkin candy but imma make this wanna be start burst out his appendix
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sumin like that. the lead in explains the punch that way u dont have to later, cuz explaining punches is wack.
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ya'll need to go read the tutorials and good battles from the past on this site

This was feedback posted for Houdini
 

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haha This place is deas. I been gone a week. D MY BATTLES AINT CLOSED. I been here 4 years and never thought I'd say this. FUCK RV, I have a more active site. Im no longer here. SO..... I will forfeit all, Not by out skill but by lack of REAL MCS here. Just dick rides.....BYE FAGGOTS

This was feedback posted for Houdini
 

lol, at King Mathers winning this. Checking polls.

Houdini loses due to forfiting.