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-   -   Week 3: Coke Dealer (2-1) .vs Mardu Entite (1-1) (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=248544)

Cola 02-04-09 11:39 AM

lol, just delete the posts than, dick licker

Civil. 02-04-09 11:41 AM

nope. i'm keepin em in here. cunt sucker. :rolleyes:

02-04-09 11:58 AM

i used a philly cheese steak punch in either 04 or 05 against a person named Phillycannonz

it just seemed flipped a little with 2x the wordplay on 'cheese steak'

i shouldn't have had to say that in my vote or even outside of it..... accept my opinion for what it is

Cola 02-04-09 12:01 PM

accept these nuttttsss

Young Kidd (LM) 02-04-09 01:13 PM

Watch me kill this 'fruit', home boy is such a fuckin sqaure
That when i write MC, Entite always seems to diss a pear
lol. square...ah haven't seen someone called that in ages.
i dunno why others dont like this line... i mean it was kinda weak but...
still an alright opener punch... i chuckled...ha


Base the money on the outcome while im season the plate
Leave'n A philly ate especially when the cheese is at steak
I've seen the concept before, but never that same flip. i'll give it to you that it's a good line but its worded very...obscurely for me...like i couldn't catch it the first time...alright opener..on the same par as Coke's..

Would lock this coke dealer up..its annoying but tempt'n
But he's a faggot in prison....the only one enjoy'n his sentence
ewww..this one is super played...fag/likin prison lines are so hard to flip these days..eh... you should of flipped the structure and put these as the starting lines...because at least the other had a little bang...


Abused as a child, i this a whorish lady...aint no dude
See why you a signle no name!! cuz this Ma's Rud(e)
nice flip on the name i think..but it really has no connect...its could have been worded better...ya know...like it was just quickly done.
overall its almost as weak as his ender...


both attempted at some wordplay...well they connected the wordplay just some played shit ya know.
hmm... i guess when i read em together i gotta give it to coke for more connectin punch because of better wording and easier comprehension...
not saying that mardu's wasn't easy to comprehend just very played and could have been better...

v/ coke

Cola 02-04-09 01:14 PM

sweet, i swayed extra hard for that vote

Young Kidd (LM) 02-04-09 01:15 PM

^ HAHA! lol or i just suck at quick comprehension...

I'll TAKE YOUR STEAK NIGGA!
GET OFF ME!

Cola 02-04-09 01:16 PM

get off me son! get off me!!!!!

Adam 02-04-09 01:20 PM

All these punches were lackluster.

For the record, the philly cheese steak line IS played, I was going to used one in a PL league in 07 and I was like no, that's gay, used an Uncle Phil punch instead.

I don't really dig this battle, although Coke had some pretty good ideas, just needs to work on the wording a bit more.

I love you both.

Vote: Coke

Cola 02-04-09 01:21 PM

Vote my dick son...my dick!

LPMNDCTE 02-05-09 12:55 PM

Watch me kill this 'fruit', home boy is such a fuckin sqaure
That when i write MC, Entite always seems to diss a pear
This was cool, good flip

Abused as a child, i this a whorish lady...aint no dude
See why you a signle no name!! cuz this Ma's Rud(e)
nah...this was not that good



Base the money on the outcome while im season the plate
Leave'n A philly ate especially when the cheese is at steak
descent hit...

Would lock this coke dealer up..its annoying but tempt'n
But he's a faggot in prison....the only one enjoy'n his sentence
Not original enough here...sentence and prison lines are played


Vote - Coke Dealer

Cola 02-05-09 04:18 PM

Madru, you better start tryin to sway votes a little better

lol

Civil. 02-07-09 07:30 AM

Coke takes the win 5-1 in votes. Good job u guys


Coke 3-1
Mardu 1-2


*K.Stubbs


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