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LPMNDCTE 02-21-09 07:07 PM

Ya bitch's pussy a corridor.. its actually harder not to get the trim
Cuz w/o pullin a drive by.. we passed the make out point within 5 mins.

This was creative, but I didnt see a hard connection with this. If you reworded this, probably would have been harsh, but as it is...not harsh enough


im bullet proof, but u aint got guns anyway cuz u aint got no doe
so I'd punch out a homeless time bomb....
....if u pointed to numbers or knew how to blow

This wasnt worded well. I see that you had a descent concept, but it wasn't developed enough and didnt work.



big guns getcha, I'll make your heart pause, no one's sicker
I'd punch out a homeless time bomb.. then stop your bum ticker

This connected pretty good. Executed well...


maybe my vision isn't clear, bitch need to sit and listen here,
Its like i'm drunk as shit.. the way I make a big pitcher disappear


Great nameplay here. this was easily the best bar of the battle


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M&rk 02-23-09 12:25 PM

yeah if my name was pitcher

Civil. 02-23-09 03:03 PM

bob wins 2-2

big pic signs out


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