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J. Luth 02-15-09 12:19 AM

word good to see this here.

"It’s time for props, & dude’s in the crosshairs where congrats be placed
So I’ll say he’s consistent as fuck.. he’s fucking ducked every guy he’s faced"

I know you just threw it out quick, but wouldn't it be smoother to word the second line like:

"So I'll say he's consistent as fuck... at ducking every guy that he's faced"

just saying

Wordz AhGod 02-15-09 12:24 AM

fucking dick.. why'd you break down my no show punches lol??? You made me look like ass, and that beavis shit was weak ass fuck but it was funny when I wrote it in my drunken state.

Civil. 02-15-09 12:26 AM

^lol drunken bars are always the funniest...until you read em again sober

lol. funny shit though,

King Solo 02-15-09 11:26 AM

I told you I will breakdown every punch dropped, INCLUDING no-show bars.

I'm about to hit everyone else's today and edit them in. Also, word to SPuL... that would read smoother.. I threw out a quick example just showing one way it could be better. The punches I throw out still have room for improvement, of course.

And lol @ Big Picture... why did I know he would be the one to catch feelings. stop pm'ing me about your fucking complaints. and btw.. that shit you sent me in the pm on how the punches were in your mind.. they still didn't work. i told you to work on execution, and i stick to it.

Civil. 02-15-09 11:29 AM

^i dont think it would be good to edit them in, nobody will know...ehm fuck it. just do that i guess

King Solo 02-15-09 11:30 AM

i'll let them know..

J. Luth 02-15-09 11:39 AM

YO real quick, you know what to do

King Solo 02-15-09 11:53 AM

word, gimme a second to post up one way's breakdown.

J. Luth 02-15-09 12:04 PM

word. How you get that X-Box live dude in your sig? I need to rep my illy dude

King Solo 02-15-09 12:07 PM

ONE WAY BREAKDOWN IS UP!!

I'll get to the rest of you before the week is done, lol.

King Solo 02-17-09 12:05 AM

wow @ me slacking on this.. lol..

one way 02-17-09 08:35 AM

cool bro, thanks


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