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JTR 10-05-09 03:29 PM

So if you write a story and say "I walked into my room and saw my dog eating chicken!"

You probably meant to say that you saw your dog, eating some chicken. As a chicken that can eat a dog doesn't make sense. And sure everyone will get what you're trying to say, but you'll still get a nice X beside that phrase from your english teacher.

Wait.... you never went to college did you?

Ummm... did you graduate highschool?

Looks like your brain isnt as complex as you think it is :(

LaTiNKiTTeN 10-05-09 08:26 PM

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Originally Posted by JTR
thats the thing

Man-eating shark. This is a shark eating a man

Man, eating shark. This is a man eating a shark

Man eating shark. Which is this?
same as above,u dont necessarily need the comma

Hitta 10-05-09 08:43 PM

Haha some of the shit you come up with is great..

JTR 10-05-09 08:43 PM

no that's wrong haha... you do need the comma

man eating shark and man-eating shark is the same

man, eating shark is the different one.. i learnt this in liberal arts

Hitta 10-05-09 08:46 PM

Indeed, you are wrong my friend.

Hitta 10-05-09 09:04 PM

"a man-eating shark" is a carnivorous fish.
and "a man eating shark" is a male human in the active process of consuming a shark.

I misunderstood what LK was saying but she's right, and JT "man eating shark" and "man-eating shark" are not the same thing.

Ltizzle 10-05-09 11:33 PM

For what it's worth I came into this thread expecting to see the Bizarre Foods guy eating a shark.

WhoAmI 10-06-09 04:34 AM

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Originally Posted by LaTiNKiTTeN
holy fuck these responses are long.

if it was the shark eating the man,it would be a man-eating shark. unless a moron wrote it.....


there we go...now can this thread close?

WhoAmI 10-06-09 04:37 AM

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Originally Posted by JTR
no that's wrong haha... you do need the comma

man eating shark and man-eating shark is the same

man, eating shark is the different one.. i learnt this in liberal arts


nah man you're wrong...assuming the words man eating shark are written down alone, you need a hyphen between man and eating for the context of the three words to refer to a shark that eats people, otherwise it clearly refers to a man eating a shark

i learnt this in english

SUPERVILLAIN 10-06-09 04:42 AM

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...we can do it...


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SUPERVILLAIN 10-06-09 04:42 AM

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im goin' for page 3...

...we can do it...


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*cheats.*


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WhoAmI 10-06-09 04:45 AM

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*cheats.*


s.v.


*helps sv cheat*

WhoAmI 10-06-09 04:45 AM

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*helps sv cheat*


*twice* .

SUPERVILLAIN 10-06-09 04:48 AM

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*twice* .


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Ysdat 10-06-09 05:18 PM

page 3 !


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