newbies strike again...
 

y does evry1 think they'll b important if they spit like Ja Rule?1st off,ya bars didnt even make an attempt to rhyme.Shit wuz senseless and jus repititous.Up ya lyrical status, then talk sh!t...fam.

yo kno wuts funny?........I ain't a newbie.....Not even Close.....I kno niggas on dis bitch fo like 3 years...I jus left fo a minute...haha.......I already told tha story why tha shit ain't tha illest.......I wuz a lil madd....i said wut i ment....I ain't even care if it rhymed........So chill tha fuck ouT........bee on tha look tho

thas da weakest shit i eva heard

yea, i mean, sorry man, but u need 2 work on it a little more. im not tryin 2 tell u how 2 rap, but just at least make it ryhme a little more.

get back on line son shit is playedout.come back to life.i didnt feel this at all.