Sorry, I'm just that damn good.

And I always thought a blunt was something you hit people with.

Yeah, i know most people do. But just to make sure. And also to indicate it's not just that, but past it.

End, i'm shit out of luck. What you said flew over my head. Care to elaborate?!...*reads it again, scratches head..*..

All comments appreciated.

OMG....Varentao, this was brilliant......You really did a fantastic job, I was laughin, I was pondering, this was just great all around...Classic even...I liked the first one better but the second one still had a lot to offer...Props to you for taking a chance and pulling it off extremelysuccessfully.
I loved this.
Stay up.

*shakes head*..gege, gege, gege....you had to up it, didn't ya?!

Nah, your comments appreciated. I just didn't think it'd get these responses. I wrote quite a bit of it within myself (meanings and one or two jokes written for my understanding rather than others...ya dig?)...surprised tis all..

...resp...

OMG

you never got the feedback you deserved on this peice

and OMG
ahahahahah
damn varentago i loved it
the reworking was great
and i thought this was excellent for a poetcic GANGSTA rap SONG lmao


They got the situation
They got me facin..
I cant live a normal life
i was raised by a dyke

^

that was just hilarious
but good
ha
i appreciate this and there for im takin it from page 6 to page 1

here we go please fasten your seatbelts kids

it may be a bumpy ride

When I read this I started laughin a bit and as i read deeper i got the feeling of it all. You have a great talent and all i see is it getting better. Keep doing your thing. spect JT

Weirdos...:guy: