Word, this is a good piece.

I'm currently writing a racism piece. Very Deep, but it taking me forever, I want to make sure it has everything I truely feel, I don't want to put anything in it that isn't what Im feeling...But after reading your piece, I want to start up on it again.

y is it dum? wdf

So sicka hearin racist shi* around this school-
They be sayin whites is great and da black is fool-
I be listenin to it everyday, dey be bitchin-
And this whole time I wanna say, don’t be dissin-
Dey aint no different den us exept da way dey look-
Maybe we could look deep, see what we took-
Their rights and freedom and self respect-
Since we stereotype we aint got no otha aspect-
Listenin to rock, crackin jokes against da people I like-
If ya wanna diss, tone it down, cuz I’m rappin on da mic-
Its low the way we front and look at em funny-
When dey be feelin the same and make da same money-
I’m white, I’m not ashamed, just pi*sed about dis music game-
Dey be judging us by da hits we sell and hear-
When we sayin words dat flow from our heart to ear-
No more trippin, we both sippin on dat Bacardi-
Rippin on eachotha do nothing but wreck da party-
F*ck the racist sh*t, ount wanna hear it from dis here hit-
Come together, word, forever!


MAXIMUS- I LIKED UR RAP, ITS GOOD TO TAKE IT STRAIGHT FROM THA HEART- THATS ONE I MADE A WHILE AGO- PEACE.

yo im feelin ur drop tite shit keep it up

always room fo inprovin in ur rhymes, lookin foward to sein more of ur stuff
peace out...

BLAH.....sorry i dont dickryde jus cuz u tryin to make a point people supposed to relate to.....beyond the subject matter this peice was off in all aspects....elevate

its been done entirely to many times

well im new here i aint seen it