yeah I know what you mean...
"the fact that ya verses worked sorta comprimises wat ur sayin"
^not really... cause I'm saying what I couldn't before, since I had that mental block and shit... when I got over it.... I dicided to write about it... anyways, thanx for the reply

i thought the flow worked for me. I got it rite first off. But ppl have different flow techniquez. But it was simple and strait to the point. Kinda defines the quote "Less is more".

Good stuff.