dude u got major talent not just on make it i croozed ur battles too, keep it up, ill here u on the box one day

nice voice .. singing was dope


i liked this alot, work on flowing with the beat .. the flow was okay tho

lol singing was gay, wasnt feeling this, ud just get clowned listening to it, ur ai diss was better id stick to not being deep

nice track dawg. u put it down raw. deep lyricz and a nice flow,catchy hook and all that. stay uppppp

THnx for all input, Fatman... why hate? lol ... just tryna do my thing... anyways thanx..peace yall.. and Ill peep everyone elses tracks..

nice shit mann, i enjoyed this, keep blazin homie

hum... not bad... good voice... good delivery... only 17..? rhyme scheme will grow on you... you might want to try and find beats more uptempo... the singin shit... do you dunny... I was kinda feelin it... more cats need to be like you and do music instead of spit on beats... shit... keep it up...



Avalon...

Thnx alot man.. always elevatin

im not hatein, i just think u much better at dissing then beein deep
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yo. this shit was ill cus i love that beat. your signing flowed nicely on this shit. message was dope. but ya flow needs polishing. it was nice, but touch it up and stay on beat cus some parts you was off and it threw me off. but yo. ill stuff tho.

stay up.

Thanx alot for all replies yall, Im gunna redo it and touch it up a bit...thanx for all the input

yo the flow was sick. but that beats not urs tho ive heard it before. i dont know if u were claimin it as urs, if u were . . . busted. If u werent, nevermind my bad for the mix up. but anyways the rhymin i was feelin for real. the singing i was NOT. but yo check out my shit at www.soundclick.com/mindtheory. it sounds like u got some pretty clean recordin equipment. maybe we could hit up a collab or somethin. I'm feelin ya flow. if u look at my site check out God's Breath in particular. it's one of my favorites. pz. get back with me. either in here, AIM (LapzstaSC2k), or Lapzsta@hotmail.com

I DON'T like your voice. Nice message, but the lyrics weren't nas or AZ-like. In MY personal opinion aim for TIGHTER lyrics (the rhyming words not the content because you got the mastered). I love the chorus it reminds me of a Bone song. You should let me write a song for you, holla at me if you feelin da idea.

Yeah this is seriously dope man, very impressed!!!! You one hot cat man!!

Peace Out Yo!!!!

Crook ed Thrilla?

lol if its u i kno u if not u pretty good........elevate on ure flow....

Go check ma freestyle diss ... lol...