next time u try to help someone i suggest u find a better approach . . .

shut up bitch i curse at everyone...take the advice with the programs amkes your quality better...that a better aprroach you faggot

first of all I dont record with WaveLab in the first place . . . so you can take your advice and your cursing and swallow it . . .


We all know you were beaten as a child, so now the little baby is mad at world . . . poor thing . . . tear . . .

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aight i like tracks with one or more people on it...

the intro is kinda cheezy...i mean it seems like your on some love shit but the intro is on some thug kinda shit...

i didnt really like the 1st cat....aight flow...whack lyrics, plain style, blahhh nothin special...

the chorus is strizz

the second guy is better then the 1st...better flow, same lyrical quality...."after you lost me i lost myself" <--blah

im glad you came hot...your shit is tight...more interestin to listen to::better lyrics, it was the only verse i didnt mind hearing...the why are you perfect line was kinda cheesy...but the rest was hot

aight track....i didnt really like the beat...it was just one loop...mad simple sample..i think ive heard it before...whack cuts...their really off beat in the begining...i actually hate this beat...

i think that the whole love theme is tough because it always becomes a smilez and southstar track...i mean you ripped it...but your boys kinda kame week...get a better beat and rap about some ill shit

thanks for the feedback E.


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