With little due respect, don't be an idiot. Your posts in this thread have been pointless.

And same goes for anyone else who posted stuff which has nothing to do with this piece, or the poetic scriptures.

If you want to battle, there's forums on this board just for that. Or you can PM each other. Just not in here.

onto the piece..

...i felt the 'stop-start' thing you had going made it fairly powerful...

...even though at times it felt off from the overall style and piece, you still pulled it off well...giving an original approach and not conforming to a style or something, just keeping it raw, and 'on the edge'....

...resp...

^^thanks dunny...you should check my other shit out man...it always gets slept on in here...good looking out...wahid