oh yea if u say i had no emotion ur on crack im practicly screamin

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sounds like u got potential, but it seems like u need some inspiration. all the shit about semi's and dont fuck with me shit is way played out. try to rhyme about some shit that has some weight to it. keep it up tho and elevate.

return the favor . . .

Mind Theory - God's Breath
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=35586

Remesis and Vain ft. Mind Theory - Off My Chest
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=34721

oh yeh and let me ask u somethin. i saw u had an unmastered version and a mastered version. what exactly does mastering entail. what did you use to do it. hit me back. pz.

thanx up

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pro tools,mastering gives better qaulity,but i didnt master this

who did? can WaveLab do the same thing?

uppity up up up...jump off nigga

cuz u just cant have a program n master u gotta have years of experiance

pro's:beat, lyrics, flow, hahaha at the prolly fag line that was tight.........kinda sound like u tryin to bite fifty on the chorus but I could be trippen....like it tho no doubt........



con's:intro uuuhhhhh lol j/k, 50 part, 1-3rd hook.....ya voice kinda went soft when u was singin......other then that NICE CUT!!!


jus givin u my oppinion, i dont ussually lay it down PROs CONs but i hope this helps some.


STAY SPITTIN


ONEhunned

yep no doubt good look pz