uppin a bit more critque

Yo Kapone, shit was good, deep stuff man, I was feelin it so much at the start, everything was all good, but then u fell off a fair bit in your rhymin and flow but the message was still damn clear dogg, good ish...

Peace Out Yo!!!!

.Real.
 

This shit was real... straight up. I feel you, like all them other niggas who posted and responded on this joint. I think a rack of us niggas have experienced it, that's why we all vent our bull shit through rhymes, know what I mean? I'm uppin' this joint kid, stay up.

thanx yall, meadskillz my verse is posted

like ur other drops this is real man
feelin it all the way thru and like folks sed the rhymin and flow was off in bits but that didnt matter straight up emotional shit

Yeah, it was a tight, heartfelt piece. I was feelin' it too, only you'll never know why. I leave tha past in tha past. There's no great deception like drugs. What's left for me to do on earth is to worship God, because we are in tha end of times. Prophet Muhammad said that between his life and the end of tha world there won't be 2,000 years. We have passed 1436 years since and most of tha minor signs of tha end of tha world that he warned us about has come to pass. That means at any time now tha end could come. It could be tommorrow or five hundred years from now, but what is certain, it won't eclipse 564 more years...but it's is only God Who knows tha Hour. Stay strong; do what ever you can to find God and worship Him because in anything else there is no benefit. This is from tha heart of a man who was once lost...Tha next great deception will be tha Day of Judgement...many who think they will go to Paradise, won't...Peace! Anybody can PM me if they want further knowledge on this subjuct...

um, thank....you, for that, tottaly uh...... useless bit of information,
this is what im doin with the rest of my life, even if im 47 years old when i cutta deal, by george ill do it

Well maybe it wasn't for you. I'm just a warner for those who fear God....