i dont kno wut im talkin about, i aint slept in 2 dayz, dogg im frickin tired

You havent slept in 2 days?

ok here we go, Dr Tristan will help you.

B.Rabbit - You need help. my suggestion is to look at how other people battle verses on here and then follow their example.

your layout-
bla bla bla
bla bla bla bla
bla bla bla
bla bla
bla bla bla bla bla
bla bla bla

Other peoples layouts

bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla
bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla
bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla
bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla

When you spit like you do, its like actually 4 bars or probably less.

Know what im saying?

Look at how bazzys lines were a lot longer than yours because he had stuff in there that was content. " you make me sick" and cliche like that will not make people look twice or even want to read the rest of it.


Vote: Bazzy

i voted on your battle, you should vote on mine :)

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=36600

BAZZY BECUZ HIS PUNCHES WERE HARDER. BAZZY YOU GOT NICE SKILL. LETS BATTLE. I RESPONDED BACK IN BITCH SLAPPED!

ya wack on it get smacked on it whos back on it\ shut down ya rymes\hes post mortem tryin ta walk wit the livin\blew em out the picture\ hit whiteballs out the park what u thought whos rollin wit cha\im foldin em like bed sheets put em to sleep\betta pull his plug cause hes in too deep

look at this cat tryin ta be me he wants my shines

bAZZY POST A BATTLE DAWG

I RESPONDED BACK IN BITCH SLAPPED. BAZZY TOOK THIS BATTLE BECUZ HE HAS SO MUCH SKILL, AND HIS PUNCHES WERE HARDER. B.RABBIT U DIRT DAWG.

reply votes dotn count at all no matter how many u have, so i'm a poll vote fo u bazzy, u had some good punches

B.Rabbit you fuckin suck. You change that name, that shit should be earned. You go and watch a movie and think your tight. Fuck give it up or atleat get a name that better suits you like BUSTED ASS RAPPER or something cause you suck. Eminem would be a shamed if he seen this shit. He was tight at battling and you aint so please change that name for the sake of slim shady.

Lol at CeeBlade ^^^^^^^
Aigh B.,Thats it,I win,Keep it up dawg
And whiterap,ya man,this shud be a good battle,we both the same age.....Ima set it up now

PZZ

Vote: Bazzy for obvious reasons.... though dude, I've seen much better

Brabbit... how bout this... go read EVERY current post in Front lines.... THEN go read EVERY post in Elite Front lines... THEN come back and battle.

Aigh dawg
Thanx
But I came weak cos he came weak

What the fuck was that, a rap or a story
you rip him apart and think its all hunky dory
u wanna battle b.rabbit cos you think hes wack
you wont get anywhere battlin people who r crap
try to battle me if you think your so smart
my lyrics are like a blade, they'll stab you in the heart
you got a good name but wot use is the shit
when you cannot rap, dawg, your just a prick
now lay off b.rabbit dawg cos hes playin wit ya
if he really wanted to, i know he could kill ya
on the microphone, so now wot does eminem think
of such a rap god, b.rabbit is good, winkedy wink

ill get you on your way to a tko, so my sit go to bazzy, sory b-rabbit
take your time and think: read your shit and tell me it wayz strait?!?
and bazzy, just cause he came through weak aint no excuse-i need sometin to laugh at...

VOTE=bazzy

who the fuck is this fuckin kid b. rabbit... takin my damn name by adding a fuckin space fuck you bitch lets battle