billys punches were more solid, but deniro had better multis, but less personals, more general, billy had a verse better made for a battle, de niros was tight, but u should have hit him harder

billy

3-0 K.O De Niro

battle over

peace

still uppin for feed-back thanks

im goin to go wit billy.....betta punches...both flow waz bout da same...

highlight of tha battle...

Are you writing with "one butt-cheek" on the seat cause your doin it "half-assed"/
Illogical "punchlines" that i "dont understand" so imma "laugh last"/
Bro.... "analyze" your rhymes.. " De Niro"/
claimin 12 victories but your "record" expresses "Zero"/
^^opener was killin...i was think bout usin da zero battle record n da battle record n his sig to..but u beat me to it lol..

Vote-Billy

can yall return da favor
n vote on
me vz spry
will appreciate it...

TS Wasn't Sayin He'd Seen That Particular Verse Before...He Was Sayin He'z seen Some Of Those Lines Flipped Before...Like The Cardiac Arrest And Half Assed Joint...NeverTheLess..Still Not A Bad Job...

Vote On This...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=36909

and fuck multies.......they make you sound pretty...
fatlip i appreciate the vote but this is a battle...
punchlines, metas, and wordplay is what counts

Billy won

Exiled, Cause Havin Hard Punches Is UnHeard Of Like Ali Boxing Again


nice......

good.. u win by ko..go against me again? and lets do this fo retirement..so if u win i will retire..if i win u get fired.. deal?

i didnt realize u had talent dats why i slept on ya with a weak drop..but battle me again and i swear to god u will loose..

-1-

^^*chucklez*

souns like a sore looser.....
tell me if you heard this......
" Im waitin for competition"

hahahahaha

live and learn kid

hahah


billy- "and fuck multies.......they make you sound pretty...
fatlip i appreciate the vote but this is a battle...
punchlines, metas, and wordplay is what counts"


^^TRue. . . but when you got good punchlines, metas, wordplays, AND MULTIES . . . thats when u gotta an ill verse that people are gonna have a hard time beating . . .^^^


anyways, billy obviously won, better everything . . .


Deniro, you should never underestimate anybody . . . thats why I have never been beaten cause I come my hardest againt WHOEVER it is im battling . . . whether it was SirPimpin (lol), X Ecution, or The best cat on this site (whoever that is) . . .



BIlly, nice Improvement . . .

I have a few suggestions . . .

People dont realizze how just changing around a few words in a punch can make it hit 5 times harder . . . for instance . . .

instead of - Bro.... "analyze" your rhymes.. " De Niro"/

you coulda put somethin like -

blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah parylyze cats/
"De Niro" brings wack verses in "pairs" like "sequels" . . . "Analyze That"//

^^just an example^^


This is to everybody and anybody readin this . . . take the concepts u have and word it so the punch hits as hard as it can . . . cause a concept can can be a wack punch or an ill one dependin on how u structure it/


also when u have 2 lines that rhyme, put the stronger line 2nd . . .


for instance. . .

Are you writing with "one butt-cheek" on the seat cause your doin it "half-assed"/
Illogical "punchlines" that i "dont understand" so imma "laugh last"/


should have been . . .


Illogical "punchlines" that i "dont understand" so imma "laugh last"/
Are you writing with "one butt-cheek" on the seat cause your doin it "half-assed"/

it woulda hit harder . . .

Just a few helpful suggestions to anyone who's readin this . . .


MY VOTE BILLY

accidental post. . .