hahahahaha...play, you cant even see the level that im on from where you are.....stack your skills and your smarts and then try talking shit....otherwise you just make an ass out of yourself...
go look at my verse....you couldnt fathom

Fow was shit hot but be a bit more creative it would kick it up a level

yeh more creativity up in dis piece wuz needed.u had like 2 decent punches but it didnt make up for tha lack of originality or the repitious use of 1 word.Elevate sum kid,not hatin jus helpin U out.Stay ^
-Avi

i have an idea, if your going to talk shit to people tring to help you get better then why dont you just leave?

you dont come here expecting every one to think your nice, if we think its wack we will tell you its wack, but we dont say it out of hate we tell you to try and make you better. listen to waht everyone say and put it into the next thing you write to make it better.

but the way you are acting now i dont think anyone is going to reply to anymore of your open mics cause your acting like a herb

Exactly^ Thank you Myk.

And play so you know, I just said that to someone who I've beefed with.