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im so fuckin sick of that cracker, all he does is post irrelavent replys to try and get ppl to battle him because no one gives him respect enuff to lyrikally fuck him up, because well... cuz hes an irrelavent cracker, hes gunna fuck aroun and get ban, fuc that bitch just dont pay attention to him, hes my bitch, musta got off his leash...

well in Scarface u tell im.

make ur bars longer, and say more words that rhyme
for example:
when i start to spit u might as well quit//
u aint a rapper, u gotta fill ur prerequisite
, your clothes are 2 tight, they dont fit. //
Ur goin out the way Elvis did, taken a shit

its corny but its just an example

too true. ur shit is too short an ur rhyme words are fit for a kindergartener. tha best way to get ideas and good lines, is just to write all tha time. an also work on tha punchlines. tru what mindtheory says bout tha double meanings. but keep hustlin',

fuck u angrywhiteguy

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"Last edited by ScarfaceKapone on 04-07-03 at 09:31 AM"

damn.

your to simplistic, i had that problem to0, but i kept at it, i may not even be that good a rapper now, but if you keep rythmin', battling, your sooner or later start to elevate'. :)

try to use multi's and shit too, ie..

Your lyrical content, i study as empirical/
your wack spits only give 50%, mine are cemented in the pavement//

yeah that was a wack verse but u get the idea, also try to keep bars mostly all the same lenght :)