good flow man, great beat, real grimy, nice hook and solid verses although the lyrics were a little blurred.

well worth the listen.
keep spitting.

thanks y'all

uppin

Flowsss Aightz..Slurrin Some Like It Said Before..Shizz Is Real Laid Back..Try Some More Energy...Lyrics And Scheme Are Real Basic..Iono Just Not Really Feelin It Keep At It..

thanks

Make your rhyme scheme more consistant the beat was alright this was alright but you gave like no emotion on this

iight man uppin

Damn.. couldnt listen to the whole thing.. i turned it off around 45
seconds. Ive never really felt you though.. this was pretty bad..

Cise

yea, i feel the same as Cise...what gets me is that u named ur song the same shit as the beat is called on Noviss's website...lmao...
atleast have an original title!haha

but back to the flow- there was none...i flipped this instrumental way better then you sorry to say...'n doubt u'll ever reach the level i took it, cuz u sounded madd corny...dont know, u have no flow so im not too interested in what ur saying...feel me? prolly not...
oUT...

beat was coo, DUDE U NEED TO PUT MORE HEART IN IT

not too bad for a 13 year old tho

monotone flow try n switch up ya style or MAYBE EXADURATE YA POWER LINES SO THEY STAND OUT MORE

ok tho

watever netcees

who's the netcee? us or a person posting a rhyme that doesnt rhyme?

says the netcee to the kid who hasnt posted online in months.
Dawg, I spit in real life now, Ive battled my way to a semi local
reputation. (In real life) So shut your fucking mouth and learn
how to rap. And if you got a problem with me or something, dont
express it to me through this thread, just diss me if you think
im such a netcee. You use netcee like Im not on your level or
something?

Cise <<very high, but still meant everything i said.. or something

NETCEE?????? ur fuckin off ther BUDDY

kinda odd coming from someone WITH 1764 posts!!!! LMAO
man u been on this site for a year n shit....call me names but i think you personify your own ignorance in a statement like that

i was jus tryin tah throw u a fuckin clue
DAMN

okay...that's good...everyone battles off the net...i'm done with this netcee shit cuz what does it proove? how far does it get you? winning a grb tourny haha...anyone who spits on the net is a netcee.