Ok i lost. But let me explain something i had punches just not as many as crooked. I had no personals and crooked did. And mind theory if your sayin that you wasnt feelin them big word then you dont know wat they mean and how they're pronounced. I hooked this verse up wid some dope lines. Every word maid since look tha words up in tha dictionary. I'm sorry that i was blessed with a big vocabulary. And crooked, did you want me to say battle or sumthin??? is that a call out??? Cuz if it is then PM bitch and i wont hesitate to give you a fuckin real ripping experience.
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I didnt say it didnt make sense. If I wanted to I could write a verse with twice as many big words, but I dont want to cause it would sound like shit. I know what the message of ur verse was, just in my opinion ur punches were weak, and I'm am not feeling ur style . . .

Crook Ed Wins By A Fucking WHOLE LOT...
Dizzy man ...WHAT WAS THAT?

wow.. Dizzy, you only hurt your cause with the post-match excuse-bearing innuendo.. That makes you look really bad to certain people. Just take the criticism (and the loss that came w/ it), and put it to work for the following weeks.. I agree with what everybody else said. Although the vocabulary was cool, the punchlines are the true entertainment..

Highlight of the Battle:
Crook Ed: "Why do you state that wack shit in ya sig..must be a herb fa real
Im sure KING O and FireSquadGangsta are extremely ill
And you run with a mafia man they musta made a mistake
Elmira?! Who would roll with D, he made a whole city Bitch Made"

some nice personals there along with punches.. Dizzy, ya have potential, but multi-syllable words don't bear the weight that a nice punch or two does.. Plus, it severely hinders the flow..


Vote: Crook Ed

This ish should be over..

awg that shit dont work. and that really shows that u new u were goig to lose and it let you opponen see that he had to victory. Dont ever do that. It broadens herizons for your opponents and it lessens the for u. U lose all your focus when u do shit lik that.


vote=crooked

hekilled it withthe personals. His wordplay was really killin. Punches multis it was rea understandable nd the consistency was there. He never got off track and he stayed on his target he never got off for one minute.

now dizzy he had ur ass dizzy. I believe that if u never would;ve posted that^^^ then u prolly wouldve had a chance. U prolly didnt reaize it but your confidence went down a whole lot even if u were just joking

stop it man. Juyst stop it dawg how can u actually say u were blessed with a big vocab. Son those are not big vocabulary words. The average sixth grader could tell u those words straight off man. U wanna enhance ya vocab READ READ READ. Then when u come across a word u dont know underline look it up then u can use it in a sentence and memorize the word and the definition. Thats not strong vocabulary man. U wanna see some vocabulary when the votes for ya attle is finished ten you can come see me and fuck PUNCHES since thats ya very weak point we'll do vocab,wordplay and multis battle now wheres ya heart reall at.

crook ed wins. 8-1

crook ed (1-0)
Dizzy D (0-1)