RapVerse.com Community - Concise - Ya feelin' me? (Free verse, takes shots at Crook-Ed and Statik)

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so... you comparin' yourself to eminem....man you need to take a realistic look at yourself......you shoulda just said this is a freeverse you wrote and this is it and did i hear a challenge we can go man, no you won't kill me lyrically.....we can battle if you want just tell me....okay......
PEACE

Quote:

Originally posted by Concise
How do you people not understand this? This is just a freeverse..
If eminem came on here and posted "Square Dance (Takes shots
at Canibus)" You guys wouldnt come in here saying "Well I guess
you dissed him, but not really" You are stupid, it wasnt a diss
track to canibus, he just randomly threw a shot at him "Canibitch
dont wanna dance with me"

Its the same situation.. faggots

Cise

very good point... moving on for a freeverse this was decent...

Flow- alright, coulda, shoulda been better

Lyrics- It was a freeverse... need i say more?...

Delivery- Alright...

...overall- Decent track...

Man, you really are an idiot. Yes i compared myself to eminem..
I wasnt comparing skill though jackass.. Your so retarded..

Cise

learn to spit...

there, thats what we mean...
-fIn-

Beats Ill...Flows Nice...Rhyme Schemes Kinda Basic..But You Were High...Decent Shit For A Quick Written..Turn Ya Vocals Up Nigg..