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wtf?^
good joke though |
lol, heres a real battle, its my make-dane-my-bitch battle
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=42647 |
this is my first blaze session n its vs dirty shanks in the RBBL
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=42035 please could i have a breakdown of my lines please so i know how ive done |
^^^...TS Doesn't Have The Time To Do A BreakDown Now...But...
Not Bad...But Not That Solid...Punches Need To Be Harder...You Had Some Really Good Concepts And Set Up Lines...But Didn't Really Deliever That Killa Blow...A Step Up NeverTheLess...Personals Were There...Towards The End You Got Kinda Simple With A Few Bars/Lines... Stay Elevating Though... |
thanks i understand bout the breakdown but thanks for the advice
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*Ladies and gentlemen......announcing the latest blaze by UnEmceeAble*
Un... vs OnE.....its was a 5-0 KO so hit this..its hot! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=45813 |
chrit versus madman
Watch King Chrit dismantle this one hit wonder, bring him to his knees/ ok opener^ He's a Champ now but still a new kid to me, joined VD in the hopes of infecting him self with a Victory Disease/ ^very nice follow up and personal Too bad he didnt realize with all those dick ryders he just contracted an STD/ ^more good shit Watched Malibus Most Wanted, bit an image and brough that shit to rb/ ^ok Took awhile to accept this and in writing his verse mad man's in no hurry/ Wouldnt accept a battle with Chrit last week citing the fact "Chrit would simply merk me"/ ^nice Watch for the lyrical sword making incisions with precision/ Had 16 shit votes an rbbl and only won by a split decision/ more personals always good^ Call me pyschic cause I'll predict all of VD votes on this shit/ What they dont know yet is all they'll be able to type is fuckin chrit ripped mad's spit/ ^ha ha good Why not just take that Bibby quote and just take those words to heart/ Just no show this battle son, cause you know its far over prior to the start/ ^weakest line so far....kinda filler Kid tries to join merk squad bringing a resume full of newbies and that Knightshade loss you delt/ ^again personal and hitting madman Faling to realize that vets hate you, hell... posting in braille is the only time your punches are felt/ ^seen that line a few times...... played Time to impersonate Roy Jones' and dismantle the champ in all the classes/ You heard the kid he's still in school, quoting my lectures from lyricist classes/ ^couple of good lines On a real note kid, just leave right now, go ahead start packing/ Cause your skill is like the melanin in your skin..... totally lacking/ ^funny shit...... Before you go, here's an autograph from me you can have it/ Inscription as follows: Keep this in your pocket so you'll finally possess some talent/ ^nice closer....liked that |
yo fgee, why did the poll of our battle closed...
poll votes are only 2-0.... now they closed and my record wasn't updated.. can you modify the poll or some so that people can continue voting...?? let me know.. peace |
i thought u just get a win as long as u are leading in the polls
fuck knows........i got a few wins that aint been added to my shit so i just did it under my sig |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1
this was my 1st battle since i returned to rb, can i get some insight as to what you all think about it?? |
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