Yeah I hit this before the crash so here's my opinion:
Spoken from the heart, that is the soul of the rhyme
I can relate to this having had an absentee father
Basis for growth, everything can grow
Some Ill shit, Speak from the heart and the flow'll come, and you'll see more in your win column

uppin u gotz my respect dogg, thx fo takin time and readin dis shit, appretiate it, much love mad man,

peace, and i'll def. return tha fava on ya next post r battle

uppin'

look out 4 me and bash, we goin be collabin preety soon, aight, keep postin, much love

yo that was tight, nice story telling element. you got my props. the onlything I dislike is that this them is also used by slim alot also, but if thats what you have to write about...then do you cuz.

God-Bless
804

Yeah, I Already Peep'd This Before The Crash Too...

So Here's My 2 Cents ::

Not A Bad Topic, Somewhat Played Out Topic But Since It's From The Heart It's still Nice.
Rhymes Were Descent, Flow Was On Point, And Structure Was ILL.
Lyrical Art From The Heart Is Always The Start To A Stress Cleansing Foundation For Yourself.
Keep Up The Good Work!

Holla'

thx fo' uppin ya'll but elements i didnt get wat u said, but n-e ways i'll be sure ta return tha fava..much love

I felt dat shit right in here. Much respect to ya for doing wat ya doing...

Life can be fucked cant it...

I know where you coming from!

Holla

uppin'

i want to say to soilder22 that shit was i.l.l. in a good way much respect ya girl lil'sexy i'm out,1

TIGHT AS WOULD BE EXPECTED

it was very nice I liked the fact that you put ya heart into this and was'nt just sayin what sounded good ya know I liked that it was realistic nice piece

damn dawg. That shit was hard. I was feelin it dawg I was feelin it. Keep that shit up man keep rhymin.

uppin ya'll

i wanna thank yall 4 takin sum tim and hittin me back, and givin me ur opinion, much love.......