That was heavy....i really liked it....keep postin man, this kinda inspired me to write my last piece.....Newbian's Dark Side.....check it out.....

peace.

That shit is tight man. I had no clue u were talkin about ya mom.....that was so sad but yet it made a great piece. I hope to see more shit like this. The flow, the words , everything was way better than anything i could ever do. Keep it up.

thanks for the critiques peepz