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ALan ALba 05-13-03 01:13 PM

yeah this was dope
Real complex, ill lyrics
you had some good words
sempt some was a forced rhyme
besides that it was cool
peace

Saladin 05-13-03 01:28 PM

Clever piece brah..

lovin the complexity and the wordplay..

no doubt..

hit me up for a collabo...

i gotta ill idea that will compliment ya style..

peace
one..

Atetrack define' 05-13-03 02:44 PM

narc ouring for a month so he wont reply till then nahmean...just lettin ya know...

bismillah

Tha Linez Drawn 05-13-03 07:18 PM

Nice job dun...even confused me for a second...these my fav lines:

i praise and pray that my metallic arteries will somehow flush my system out/
pumps blood thats brown, stained and drowned in pain/
in shrouds i reign, mourning the loss my own soul processed and resurrected/
infected by retrospective, collective thoughts set forth defective

looks like repentence...nice job


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