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Criminal Intent 05-20-03 06:36 PM

u know they always say punches when battles. Well in this battle one had punches while the other wasnt feelin. Im a start off by sayin i wanna give this a tie but it would have to be an extremely ill battle for me to give it a tie.

so

favorite lines

This bitch is Murdered with this Verse "Period", speakin of which it's to remove this Bitches Tampon // 12

didnt really have good structure but a pretty good line overall

The only reason Tonya wins Battles, is cause she got an Army of dick riders//

ill line but it would make peeps think that u werent really tryin

Ill Rip-ya-Anatomy, You Cant Stand Up to Me, Cause Ill leave you Laid-Out// 8

my favorite in ya verse and its the only one that stood out to me

other comments
if u feel u not in the mood for a battle especially battlin a nubian(i think) goddess like tonya u should ask for extensions or post pone cuz she got a reputation for rippin niggas. i just think u need to try and stay focus nahmean.

breakdown

multis-excellent
punches-poor
disses-good
metas-good
wordplay-excellent
structure-good
flow-good
originality-average

overall-7/10

tonya baby tonya ! WHOOOOO

How you get One LOSS on your
RECORD you must've FIRED ya GHOSTWRITER//

ouch is all i got to say

You
have tha HARDEST Crew on RB when yall holding each other
DICKS-in-HAND/

damn thats an insult

I heard you call ya ASSHOLE "TENDER LOVE"
cause you like to "FORCE MD's"{More Dicks

that shit was plain dirty


got 7 wins and afta this Battle
you gonna bring me 8{Kobe}like the LAKERS//

i like the idea but it wasnt to original

you say I have dick riders naw I just RIDE DICKS//

that was my favorite line :D

other comments
girl u keep spittin and doin ya thing. U can hang witht he best of them. I can tell this wont ya best but that shit was still hot so it shows that you're unstoppable even on your worst day. Good flow

breakdown

multis-poor
metas-excellent
flow-good
structure-excellent
wordplay-excellent
punches-excellent
disses-excellent
originality-good

overall 8/10 so u won by a small margin but that coo.

good battle to both of ya'll

Evil_SoLo 05-20-03 06:47 PM

YO, TONYA TOOK THIS WITH EASE. I mean seriously she just schooled this cat. NICE VERSE TONYA. yo return the favor at my battle vs RYANo
vote = tonya
stay up playaz

NewPort 05-20-03 07:17 PM

Hit up that battle wit Hurrikane (pay attention to the lyrics and not the posts cuz i think it was evenly matched unlike the posts' read lol just vote and tell me wut u think) and in 10 posts i'll hit you back wit a vote -one

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...?threadid=48377

Tonya~Montana 05-20-03 09:05 PM

thanks for showin luv yall and votin!! up................................................ .....................up!.................

AZTEC_PRINCESS 05-20-03 09:24 PM

good job tonya very very good and if i had the opportunity i would poll vote on ur shit ...... but then nuclear weapons had some good shit as well ...
vote = tonya

Tonya~Montana 05-20-03 09:30 PM

thanks ........ preciate that!!............................................ .................................................. ................................

Nuclear Weaponz 05-20-03 09:35 PM

LMMFAO.........WHAT??????? She was dissin on my crew lol. And i dont even have a crew. Yea you had some nice punches and good structure, but now let me break it down. You had no multi's from what i read (which was tha whole verse) one or two meta's about tha whole 8 and kobe shit. Criminal intent dont know how to vote lol sayin you got excellent disses and punches. They're tha same things lol. And you did have nice punches but they never made since, if i had a crew your verse would of been a whole lot better. Thats pretty much all i have to say.
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Tonya~Montana 05-20-03 09:45 PM

addin dat you had a crew to this battle was sumtin xtra!!
I don't use multi's anyway!!!!!!!

Besides your shit played!!!!usin sex against a female is played out!! My punches made sense!! you just don't understand them!! TOO DEEP FOR YA!!!

Nuclear Weaponz 05-20-03 10:07 PM

Naa, you have no idea what clever is. I could introduce you to it if you would like?? Want a rematch??? I just relized i did lose this battle. No beef over this, but i CAN beat you. And would like to prove it to you right now. I'll be back on in one hour to an hour and a half. Stay on set up tha rematch. 10 lines no more no less. And witness my cleverness. If you wish.
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Criminal Intent 05-20-03 10:13 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Nuclear Weaponz
Criminal intent dont know how to vote lol sayin you got excellent disses and punches. They're tha same things lol. 21


let me hit u like this

"i'll pull ya heart out and rap to its beat"-punchline

"You wacker than the muthaphucka u bit ya style from"-diss

get ya lyrics persona straight and just accept the fact that u got beat. I hate it when niggas got beat now they wanna whine about it. Do u see me whinin in our battle i done seen 2 unfair votes but i know for a fact that u were better so i accepted it and i aint bitchin

InStIgAt0r 05-20-03 10:20 PM

BOO FUCKIN HOO is all i have to say, you lost nuclear. You both had some tight verses but she won. Respect to ya both.


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Tonya~Montana 05-21-03 10:40 AM

thx for showin luv yall.............................................. .............................................uppin before i go back to class

mr.mayhem 05-21-03 12:08 PM

sorry Montana cuz any other day i would really go wit you on this. But today.... Homie had more lines that dropped my head
"You wouldn't have dope tracks if you were a heroin addict" It ain't TRU but it was hot. So..

vote=nuc weaponz

mr.mayhem 05-21-03 12:09 PM

i'd appreciate if yall peeped my battle with skiddlezz cats is snoozin on it freepostin and shit.............................................. .................................................. .........................................

g-rho 05-21-03 12:18 PM

i gove it to nucler. was a good battle though

y'all check this out though
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=48559


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