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uppin fo mo commets
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I can tell this was from the heart, but you need a little more work. Flow was ok, mostly fell off. Some nice emotion in your words. Vocabulary was coo, and usually that makes it more interesting to read. I liked the title tho, "Make Them Listen," I hear ya man. Shit's crazy.
Good drop tho dawg. Keep it up. pZ! |
Weezy, post somethin i wanna see what you got
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