i like the way sands was a story about someones actions....the whole advice at the end was a good top off to the whole scene..
"so when ryan was just 2 months the start of his life..
i got sicker than ever..and eventually just died..."-terrific..

.lyricalli was good too i liked this saying

"So we change.. Most of our decisions induced by opinions of our peers
High School Locker rooms flooded with emotions.. The halls become dominions of our tears.."

my favorite..

but my vote goes to sand i really felt his..

Vote=Sand

I edited the poll for evileys vote...
is it getting closer? i hope 3-2 him....



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ahh, man .. Don't know about that .. But, whatever.. For the sake of a close battle, good luck.

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...if you dont want it to count it is up to you....
she read both verses and even told me it was close...
that is your call. she is my girlfriend. i can see the
reason for suspicion. let me know.



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Very intense battle here. And as a Word Perfect member, I hate voting on this shit, but WP wins reguardless.....

In a matter of opinion decision, I feel Sand came better because she really hit home with a message, one I nearly learned the hard way.

Again, this battle was so close it came down to which one I could relate to more and Sand's just happened to be that... close.

Vote ~ Sand...... very close.

upping . tied at 3-3...








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Polls are closed...
What happens in a tie?...
A tie...
a Tie...
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Sorry Sand, but you missed the vote from Trip Marxx that went to LyricAli, I went back and counted, and it was 4-3 LyricAli. Go check for yourself, but LyricAli wins.