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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Thanks yo........this shit wus just on mind i had to let it out.................thanks for apreciatin and thanks for yo feedbacks
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yo playa tis was deep as fuck like tha twist at tha end a bit choppy at a few parts but nice werdplay good imagery sorry u had to go through tat i got abusiv parents as well so i kno ya pain
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^Thanks dawg................UPPUN
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fuck that whack ass shit........ur garbage ruth........1
nah.....u know i had to get u back for that shit u did......anyways....that was a nice piece right there....even though i have a different view of women right now.....i felt it.................keep em commin playboy.....1 |
this was cool, it had a good message....threatening, but good.
you left out the part about women being made from Adam's rib. In the words of Archie Bunker "it was a cheaper cut" anyway, I was diggin the whole four line stanza thing, it looked almost like a poem, but with mad flow. good spit dude Peace |
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^THANKS DAWG....................
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I Was Really Feelin That The Concept Used In This Song is Played Out Not Only With Net-Cee's But In Main Stream Aswell,You Have Nice Flow But If You Could Do Something a Little More Complex With Better Vocab You Could Mos Defintly Be Ill..
pZ... Spitzophrenic |
EMHHHHHHHHHHH^^^^^^^^^^^^^^WELL THANKS FOR THE FEEDBACK AND SUGGESTION.......lol
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