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NuclearConcepts 06-01-03 08:31 PM

Boo ... 1) you stole the concept from keith murry

2) you did it horribly.

if you tried to be funny , you failed

if you tried to play around with the song , you failed.

No matter what you tried doing with this .. it didnt work.

Bash 06-01-03 08:33 PM

I messed up on this shit......Aight cuzz..............Emcees go through this.......Where they have a drop and its whack.........4 sho cuzzn.........Keep bringing tha Feedbacks

Genetikz 06-01-03 08:40 PM

fuck dat shit,,,,, dis was iight man,, i no i maybe cant battle but not many can spit ill freestyle emotinal pieces like me..

maybe u stole a headin but wtf noone ever done that before? get outta here

deeni 06-01-03 08:43 PM

i could be new to this shit but i think i could lay you down show u the tru essence. i been waitin n u been stallin so wut up, HOLLA!!!!!!!!!

GrYm StYlE 06-04-03 11:21 PM

Im wack Huh
THis was some Ja Rule Garbage
You Stink
Im A Drop it like this here for ya

There is no rhyme detection/that could warn you of my impeccable timing perfection/my psychiatrist concluded that I got a freestyle addiction/quality rhymes I be spittin/I don''t flow/I rise/to da top of this battle board until its mine/idiots like u should start reading inbetween my rhymes/I made battling an event in the Olympics/I make drunks stop being alcoholics/I make homosexuals hide back in the closets/I made people with no ass take a seat/when MCs battle me they get Alzheimer''s disease/I make lyricists say fuck the beat/made DJs say fuck the MCs/made graf writers say fuck the wall when doing graffiti/made b-boyz say fuck the floor when they be doin shit that be intense/spottin fake cats like u has become my sixth sense/there is no defence against my ish/I don''t speak English/I speak lyrisism/defeating cats like you is my mannerism/you can''t cure it if you did an exorsism/I made pimps become bitchless/I made emcees admit that their favourite holiday is Christmas/just so they can put my rhymes on their wish list/Santa even sent it to them using Fed-Ex/even though I wasn''t there I still was bussin them up like Lennex/Lewis/cats like you are clueless/trying to battle me is foolish/I got u locked/u can''t even beat me if u shadowboxed/my rhymes make MCs scratch their head like dogs with fleas/I invented similies/cause the only way to explain my rhymes is to compare it to something unrealistic/to make it symplistic/cause dumb-asses like you can''t understand my 2 to the power of 5 lines/if I gave u a sponge u couldn''t absorb my rhymes/u could get a brain transplant/but still be too dumb to understand/cats like you be on my hit-list/now take a lie detector test and admit this/YOU KNOW MY RHYMES BE THE FUCKING SICKEST!

GrYm StYlE 06-04-03 11:27 PM

Alll right im done for da night
But befo i go Bash


yo i possess cosmic powers beyond nuclear and atomic/
i move at the speed of light and wit'' more force
than a comet/
i move the heavens and make volcanoes erupt/
my heart is black to the core and my mind is
seriously corrupt/
My rays of devastation will shatter the 9 planets/
i''ll absorb all your energy and use it to my
advantage/
u want war? u better forfeit because once
i absorb it/
the entire universe will be out of orbit/
My brain is an infinite blackhole/
i''ll swallow u whole and shit out your skeleton out
my asshole..........what......

Bash 06-04-03 11:27 PM

Good Job cuzzn........{Claps}


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