up up and away!!!!
Toto, I have a feeling we're not in Kansas anymore......................
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we both stayed last at work that night...floodgates of attraction smothering each other
on the large wooden desk....we evolved from friend into lover

^Great line for an overall great verse. I liked it from start to finish. A great twist on the ending. But maybe he should have killed her. Just a suggestion.

Vote=Fgee

i thought about doing that^^^^^^
but i decided to let the slut live.........................................
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well fgee, you swept me.
awesome fuckin verse dude.........
Peace--------------------------------->

all i have to say is WOW!!!

this was one of the nicest Topical battles i have seen in a while on this site.... seriously, props to both of you.... you both had dope verses.,.... great imagery and great delivery... but in the end there is only one winner.... wish i could call it a tie, but i cant.... so my vote goes to Fgee.... his story just held my attention so nicely.... i could picture everything happening.... it was like a mini movie in my mind..... DOPE

Respect to both of you

uppin for fgee's win
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