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Originally posted by Un-Skrypted
Hmm.. close battle.
Scare : Nice line tho the flow was off, and many words didnt rhyme at all. Very good ending and emotion put into this however.
Pledge : Very in depth story, realistic, but the ending was a little weak and corny. To go over the limit as u did, I expected a lot of imagery and description in your verse to not find any. Also, like Scare, a lot of bars didnt flow or rhyme... hurt it a little more.
Vote : Im going with Scare on this one. The ending took it.
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pledge i know we're crew, but your verse was too long and drawn out, scare got to it, and took this one |
