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DaviD WoRdplay 06-04-03 09:32 PM

thanks...

uppin for feedback

DaviD WoRdplay 06-05-03 09:02 PM

Any other feedback?

WeeZy 06-05-03 09:39 PM

This was aight. The flow was decent. On and Off throughout. Vocabulary was nice tho. You maintained that, consistency is important. Multies here and there, but why did you bold some words? I'm not getting that.

pZ!

DaviD WoRdplay 06-06-03 01:17 PM

Re: Open.Mic.Project Presents:[.What is Heat...?.] FT: Meta 5
 
Quote:
Originally posted by Meta 5

I Come to Find Artificial Intelligence In Every Word Spoken
I Bolded this b\c that's my crew... AI

Insult Names With Every Open Mic, Puttin' InFumZ to Shame
I Bolded this b\c this is a crew I was dissin' kinda

Words Are Perfect, With Meta's To Reflect Our Open Mic Project
I bolded Word, Perfect and Meta b\c Word Perfect and Me META consist of the Open Mic Project... get it? ... not that hard

BlUnT-MC 06-06-03 02:25 PM

bringin heat again' meta.. tha's str8 dawg.. the flow seemed a little off, but overall it was nice for the content, I liked the topic you did too.. it biggs up ur game, lol.. wasn't really a creative topic but it was still a topic, ne-who.. keep bringin' tha raw shit.. 1


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