RapVerse.com Community

RapVerse.com Community (http://community.rapverse.com/index.php)
-   Front Lines Battles (http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=63)
-   -   Ronin Vs Feeble Minded...he Messed Up The Other Link This Battle Is Fucking Tight!!!! (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=54278)

youngblood 06-05-03 06:23 PM

i think feeble ripped this one. ey feeble check out my battle against rythemic tendencies and vote for the best verse aight!!!

poll vote- feeble

Ekwipped 06-05-03 06:32 PM

Whooooo-weeee haha, this battle was tight, to the kid who said it wasn't.. well, it was. heh. Alright I'm gunna give the break down of what I thought..
*clears throat*

Ronin came hard, I mean if this shit was audio I woulda loved it, cause everytime I read battles I always think that I am reading them wrong, but Ronin had some decent wordplay, his rhymes were multis but it still seemed simple at times, but so did feeble mind, I think feeble took this with lines like:
Quote:
i dont have to type big to be noticed...bitches feel it just cuz i wrote it/
your flows the re-motest, quote this, you still aint hit puberty, voice only changed from 'deep' throatin/

and
Quote:
only way ya blows are vigorous is if you take my hand and use it/
my flow is rigorous, triggering blows, use this keyboard, i bash and abuse it/
you rest in the casket, i resurrect ya body to re-blast it/

^I just liked how that sounded, it had a really great flow. it was dope.

Ronnin came really nice though, not someone I would battle anytime soon, but I mean, it's not liek this was a blow out, good job.
Peace

Feeble Minded. 06-05-03 06:36 PM

thanks.....thats what im best at, multi-rhyming...
a lot of people love punches though, so i try my best to add those in....
thanks for voting , to bad for me you can poll...

dw. 06-05-03 06:39 PM

i gotta go wiv feeble on this one beta flow n punches but close tight battle! i'll poll that if ya vote on my battle wiv either mc porno or jay da ripper! the min u vote i'll poll this!

Feeble Minded. 06-05-03 06:48 PM

i did...you said "the minute"...its up...been two minutes lol...please poll....more votes,,,,,,,dghfhjdfguldflgjsdflghgluhfkldfghuseri lfhsdfilgvbndfisgudfug

Ekwipped 06-05-03 06:49 PM

I know man I'm at liek 32 posts, I was like ARG! fuckin poll votes. Blah. haha Good job though, the punchyes didn't seem forced, you said you try to add them in, and usually when people do that they seem forced. good job though, it was all real smooth

dw. 06-05-03 06:51 PM

polled that now feeble will u poll dat vote on my battle cos u 4got 2 dawg n i just need that 1 vote, thanx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Feeble Minded. 06-05-03 06:57 PM

oh sorry, sure ill do that dawg.>>>>>>>>>@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@bjndfgjkdfghsd fjkghfsdjkghsdfjkgjhsdfjgkhsdfkgdfsvbnvbkl;hj;xbju ajsflnowerughbi6lmni e;/aa

Feeble Minded. 06-05-03 07:04 PM

more voters?sdfviksdfvksvhnfkvndffihuiuhuifuhsuiahv,lfk ldbnsdkbnfkndfvka.vcmxcvdfnvdfkv/VLlsfkjlsgsdfjbmsdbs;bdfglsdfgsdfklgndfskjvsdjfklg njdflgsdfgl;sdrjglsdg

Feeble Minded. 06-05-03 07:13 PM

yo uppin will vote fairly on your battle if you do so here. lfjdfgkldhgkshvjkfvdfkvdnfvjkdfvnjdfkvndfsjklgjdfn svjknjfvjk

no haters allowed.

Feeble Minded. 06-05-03 08:12 PM

one more dlfkjhasdfkhsdaifherfuierufhruiuh@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@hvkvjdfkshfftruitiuyuruyfuiyrfioqwuuriuiortqqu oqroururtrttyththghgh

Feeble Minded. 06-06-03 12:38 AM

yo i am uppin for just one more vote.....vote up fairly please. will hit a link for you fairly....>>>>>>>>>>@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

Noiz 06-06-03 12:44 AM

This Battle Was Fucking Awsome..best I've Read In A Long Time..But FEEBLE Took This Cause His Wordplay WAS SICK...Ill battle Though...Ima Have To Go WIth Feeble Though Other Guy had Good Punches TOo..Damn Wordplay Laughing My Ass Off...

Vote=Feeble
Me Vs Envey
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=54474


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 03:06 PM.